A interesting story with a compelling world that unfortunately suffers from some severe pacing issues, with entire chapters dedicated to explain simple ideas, making the result feel like filler. I believe that if the author can work out this problem he is bound to be successful, since clearly he has talent.
this one is good with no unnecessary cliches like others---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I remember reading this back in 2017-2018 back when I'm browsing for some good novel similar to Eliza-sama. During those days, I don't bother to create a webnovel account since I'm not keen on using it (but now I'll definitely use webnovel more since wattpad sucks nowadays). I have to say, I read this once again for the memories and yup, it's still as good as I remember. I was hoping for similar book like this where the female lead focus on their own survival while having a realistic outcomes because I'm a sucker like that.
The story is amazing I'll give you five star. I hope you continue writing. 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words
Over all It could be worse.Look, I'm not going to stand here and act like you guys are all naive enough to not know what's going on in the "obvious Isekai."Its average joe shmo isekaied into, pause for dramatic effect, the heros ring. A legendary god-tier artifact that no one in this entire world has heard about. And of course the isekai "victim." 'Really hard to sell this genre as a bad time.' Is an overpowered magic mcguffin. Well he... It? has the potential to be.Yea, the Pepsi-twist that this generic isekai story going for is that he's a potentially "game breaking" support item for the hero, who does all the fighting. This is actually interesting and gives the story an air of tension that other fantasy story's don't have. Real death. See as top tier loot the protagonist is sort of immune to being killed or destroyed, but each arc's big bad. But the fingers he's on are much less safe. Heck the first couple of chapters convey that lesson very clearly. As he's then stuck to the knight who killed his last "finger detonator." And even though his new "benefactor" is your generic knight-like champion of justice. The fact that the ring is destined to go to the hero, gives tension to fights. Throughout the first arc I was worried for the knight, and as strong as he was he was going up against a final-boss-like opponent. The only thing that is truly holding this story back is the wrighting quality, and the character dynamics. And, slowly but surely both are improving.
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