Overall a pretty solid start to a novel. After reading the free chapters I can say it has set the stage excellently for a slow slice of life with a twist. The characters are realistic with quirks but not becoming stereotypes of caricatures . As for complaints its mostly minor things, there's rare but significant translation hiccups, the setting is mostly pretty uninspired, and there's only a limited number of chapters available currently. Otherwise the pacing is a little slow, and the MC does have a "system" of sorts which may be off putting to some.
You've a good potential to capture a reader... I'm like wow, the story plot is great, your synopsis is awesome. I'm looking forward to sit down with my popcorn and read this book.
Good in-depth character and well-written background! a rare sight because most new novels have problems with that. all the best author san! please don't drop this.
... ffirst chapter was very good but the next ones are kind of akward and hard to read with the description like with the apple-mango-melon-orange thing. mc is should be a kind of genius but behaves really strange like shouting and talking almost everthing out loud not thinking of the problems that this could bring.... is a good story but not on my taste ¯_(ツ)_/¯
As Marwin continued lecturing on the stage, Aegon and Aenar who was sitting in the back row. Their eyes were closed and both of them were cultivation their family personal technique, while what Marwin said was true it was useless for them as they were taught by their Imperial Father personally and both had a natural advantage over their peers as their body was way of the chart compared to them, after all they are dragons and no matter what Marwin said, dragon is superior to human, practitioner or not.
t"Staircase is good you can put up a bar here for soju. Korean are popular for band too right pwede kang mag put up ng mini band music stand here. I like the tables and chairs they're good."
But as he ran towards him he felt a thirst for powerful blood that made him fall from the rolls and begins emptying his already empty stomach but he did not fall unconscious.
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