control • theo raeken [1]

I love this.it is good. I shall praise. Deal with it. I like. What is good, this. Well made. Amazing. Spectacular. Great. Good. Nice. Me likey. Ok ok......the cheesy romance is very much to my liking and the quality and rate of output is pretty good i guess

Raw link please ?                                                            it is lovely                                                            

its a game but, not really. its another world but the mix of players, again not really. a weird blend which is hard to swallow maybe inedible. and why is this type of novel here again? i thought we were over with this? Now.The Mc has become a Npc which should have been ok IF there were no players.addition of players make me not take it seriously cus its a game. just a GAME i can't read it knowing its all Big BS. maybe later in the story author would make it so that this world is real and things. another problem is that people don't die even dead NPC( others) cant die they will revive, a big down for me because u can't be immersive enough in this because its just unreal.

So I'm reading thus far and all I can say is that the writing quality gets better as the chapter continues. You can really determine that this novel is more than decent and readable for most readers and I commend the author for doing this.The stability of updates may not be daily but as you can see from the dates, there are a couple of chapters released in a day so that is heavily compensated for those who released daily.The world-building is adequate, not rushed, or not slow. You can truly savor as though you're one of the adventurers in this novel!Thank you author for the job well done.Try my novel#Rise of Evil Sword Godtag;- R-18,harem,action,romance, Xianxia

Decided to be shameless and post a five star review, just cause I can lol.Kidding aside, hope you guys out there do try the novel out. It still has problems and kinks I need to work on, but I'm confident enough to guarantee that the grammar is above average, despite my weakness in using punctuation marks hehe.It's SciFi and Fantasy mashed together, but with a twist. It has Mecha too. Do check it out. And please leave some reviews if you have the time. I'll appreciate some feedback. Any kind of feedback! I'm that desperate lol. Cheers y'all.

-15 HP [Unclothed Mole Rat]

"Mhm, thank you. You all are dismissed." The Hokage said puffing out some smoke.

Finally the bell rang and the teacher entered the class. Everyone got up except him, he was just in his own world where his face was turning red and his eyes were shining like a diamond, widely open, as if he saw something really antique. That was his english teacher, Rin, 23 years old beautiful girl with charming personality, light brown eyes with long black pinned hair.