A Wonderful Job. And I like your book cover. Its literally a very nice storyline, Fantasy, Thrill etc are my Favourites though. Highly recommended. Keep going Author.
Honestly, the story is so contrived and boring. God damn, this is one of the hardest reads I've ever encountered. Where has the quality of novels gone. Beginning was just so generic; and I don't even dislike generic themes, as long as it's done right. This was not done right, and I'm speculating it never will. I'm not gonna fault the translator without knowing the source material, because as I said; it is hard to read. Seems to be stable updates, good work on 100 chapter initial release; dedication dude (Don't know if this was translated on other site, but ah well). Whatever, continue the project and see where it takes you. Maybe the novel undergoes some sorta genesis and goes god level.
Are you fucking kidding me??? Shitty ass god of fishing got picked instead of this! Wtf, stupid ass ****os on this site will take that! Fucking fishing!? Now i have to read mtl which is complete loss of fucking braincells. 😭😭😭🤬🤬🖕👿👎. FUCK! SHIT STAIN EDITORS CHOICE, I CROSS VIEWED THE FAN SUPPORT AND THIS WAS THE THIRD OR FOURTH HIGHEST ONE THERE, TRASH ASS LYING FUCKS, THIS AIN'T NO DAMN DEMOCRACY, THEY JUST PLAYED WITH MY FUCKING DICK AND THEN TORE IT OFF, YOU STUPID FUCKS DIE.
What's up with all these trash novels. I bet you guys added them to library... sigh........................................................................
The Novel is really nice I won't lie when I started reading I didn't have much expectations about the just wanted to kill time but I you got me hooked the Novel is great and it being your first novel you did an amazing job Am amaze with the way you developed the characters and the other aspect of the novel Keep the good work
The synopsis is too short that I delved into the story immediately. Your plot is really intriguing. I love the character development . The feeling is just like you are crying but fighting all your own. But your description is too great. I encountered positive vibes. More power to you.
I have read 70 chapters and i do think tyis story has potential it was just written by sime one who sucks at the most basic parts of writing. If the author bothered to go back and correct his many obvious mistakes and stoped deleting peoples post because they leave a bad review then this could be on par with some great novels like world of worlocks. Some things he does wrong is:1. The way he writes makes me think English is is not his first language. Which is not the problem the problem is he writes so 1 dimensionaly , MC is an ideot that flip flops me then a fish out of water. Dies because of wrandom woman .Promises to live for himself no others. Transports to another world . Gains powers at a stupidly fast wrate .Bumps into wrandom whore gives out precious knouledge about fire for free. Now ***** is never mentioned again. 2. There is no structure he pretends to be careful but, he is as arigent as they come. Does not do basic reserch about brand new world. Ok about killing human for no reson after 1 command from the principal at a school. Should have 0 fighting experience but Does not matter cuz he 1 shot everyone. No one has escape ability despite the people he is fighting are hundreds of years old.3. Super easy to become a god he does not need to train meditate , explore , get good equipment. Demi god stronger then mid god him. His chess philosophy is super lame i liked his old powers better. 4. Gods who have lived hundreds and thousand of years are stupid like pre-pubeant ****. When he is on adventure because he is at mid god leven and arthur is only now how there is no one else in story to give an F about he ads more 1 dimensional mid god beings who tell u ****ty background ove campfire. Insted of being mysterious and all incompassing instead of acting like a lvl 10 adventure group. There are many problems this is just the tip of them i just hope Arthur fixs them so story can actually be good.
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