Common Sense Manipulation App

I liked the novel first chapter had a good hook. Keep writing and improving good luck...................................................................

the story is decent. everything is good.until the mc became a Beta.I will not trash talk about this novel because everyone has their preferences, and I will respect your opinions.but just heads up for you brothers who hate beta mc.

Good book. The Mc so far is smart and I like his personality. Side characters not bad at all and the story is engaging for me at least. Not much too say except it’s a good story. Ya know this week’s selection seems to be the best we had for over a month having two pretty good books. So anyway you can’t go wrong reading this, I guarantee it’s better than most of the s#it we had in trial reads before.

the daoist hereeeee.  I have been keeping an eye n this one and it was really worth it                                                               

"I can not do that," I told him, a little embarrassed.

"Maybe I should have broke a window…"

"You meant to say some floater nabbed our boy. Eh, Boss?" Matthew spoke.

I could use a little fuel myself