The story is getting worse as it progresses.MC was cautious and smart at the start, then he became dumber as the story progressed. He became dumbest when he got a companion fairy. Then he forgot almost all his gaming knowledge.Earlier when he thought that death was permanent, he was fine killing fellow humans. Later he found out it was only temporary, now he spares other humans.His personality also changed. Now he likes showing off and not finishing the fights quickly.I stuck so far because i liked the starting. I still think it would have been an excellent story if the author didn't purposely made it worse. To keep the story excellent all he had to do was make the MC's character consistent. Was is too much to ask for?
Very well written novel. I like that its set on 20th century not a lot of novel is set on this time period most are medieval period. This gives a fresh feeling on the novel.if there is any critic its in the world building mostly about the colonies (africa/south america/asia), there was not much mention about it even though it played a huge role in that time period.
Great novel, people are traumatizing with cheat so they dislike but it's a new concept in webnovel, the only thing that I dislike is because the mc talk about business and money a lot but doesn't go for these things, I hope that changes later on.Can someone give me the raw?
very well written novel with well done story ,the characters are decently done, the world building is phenomenal specially how the author connected his other 2 stories to this one building a interactive Universe so I loved this aspect hope that the author keeps up the good work
I have to say great detail in the game a great story that made me want to keep reading it and i hope it Continues from here dont want to be stuck on this cliffhanger rIght here
I don't think it is a copy of the old one. This reads like a reviewed and changed version. Like the next step in refining a book before release.MC is just as stupid as before. If the system can plan elaborately and even plan years ahead to heal MCs finance, then the system can plan more than 24 hours ahead to ensure MC accomplishes his goals with as little obstruction as possible.Trouble is MC just doesn't ask the right questions and every problem is solved deux ex machina by the system. This means that every problem and trouble the MC encounters is because he doesn't ask the right questions.It is almost impossible to write a good story if at every turn the readers feal cheated because the only reason suspense happens in the book is the hand of the author.Even the most stupid person would have asked "How can I live happily with my wife while ensuring everyone who wronged us gets what they deserve? " after a few years. And the MC had enough time to ask every question imaginable in prison.Also, why didn't he just ask to be released earlier? Don't tell me the system can't get him a cellphone into prison. A single call was all he needed to get a pardon. This is how the American prison system works.He could have build an empire from prison, with scores of researchers trying to find a cure for his fiance.This story only works because the author keeps the MC stupid to the extreme.
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