First you say hes six then you say hes eight. Pick an age and stick with it. Second the mc has MAJOR rapist vibes. No idea Why he just comes off that way
In this novel, the MC revels in genocide of people where he grew up, just because the top leader misled the good people. I think the author should be placed under close psychiatric observation. Sometimes disturbed people acts reveal their inner thoughts before tragedy.
Hello everyone, this is my first novel in writing an Eastern Fantasy story as well as System. I hope I can do it well.Actually I'm still afraid to write stories outside of my own comfort zone. Because actually I call this a challenge.
Was an interesting idea that's ruined by the authors 1 inability to keep a consistent logical timeline, 2 cool loot that is nerfed or disappears from the story entirely shortly after it was introduced, and 3 poorly written fights. Though other than those the story IS well written.
ELeven new chapters has came out today hope you enjoy them spend a lot of time last night to write down and publish harder than you thing anyway have a good day.
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the title is misleading since he didn't own the cultivation world but discover it instead but it's still a good read the story pacing is a bit slow but okay to me
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