Chef of Chaos

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"Master Zachary! It's time to wake up. You have sword training with your big brother.

Habilidade nível: Bronze.

With a grim smile, Mu Rong Ying stood in close proximity to Jiang Chen.

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming

Only shooting stars break the mold

Three guards rushed from the sidelines, and grabbed Leon roughly, shoving him to the ground on his knees. After they tied him tightly with rough rope, that rubbed against his skin, itching consistently. Reginold walked up to him, seizing his knife handle with an iron grip, as if the knife would fall from his grasp without much effort.

Have yet to read it but based off other reviews it has a unique set up for its characters personality

Hello!!! I know I said just minutes ago that I would wait to post a review, however I don't feel like sleeping tonight! Anyhow, to keep this great story from being spoiled, I'll try to only dance around some stuff. To be honest, one of the gramatically best novels I have read. I look at some of the AI translated ones and it's like comparing Heaven with Earth (hahaha... ha). Then, the story development. You are doing a great job pacing the story with the system in question. It's hard to not go from weak to a godly figure with wishes, so I can understand some of what you've done with the character. The character design is a bit iffy, to say the least. He can wish for so many other things that would make him powerful, but he chooses things that I do not agree with. But once again, I know you're compensating. Besides that, the characters have very unique personalities that I can actually relate to, which makes reading this a lot more enjoyable.The updating stability is... Uh......... Just make sure to keep up with the story. The world background is pretty basic. I like the exclusion of manuals; that concept always drives me nuts. The reason I'm rating this 5 stars is because it can further develop. I'm intrigued by the empires being included in the Murim and the dynamics between classes and cultivators.I have really enjoyed this so far and hope you can keep it up... Also, you know what I'm hoping for later. I'll be waiting...

Emotional start! you a mommy gurl or mommy boy are you Author! Story is getting interesting from chapter to chapter! Keep writing...you are not allowed to slack off! I want more chapters! DO YOU UNDERSTAND! THIS IS AN ORDER! NOT A REQUEST!