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MMORPG: Rebirth of the Strongest Vampire GodI confess, the cheesy title made me strongly hesitate before reading this novel, and only its consistent presence at the top of Webnovel’s charts finally decided me to read this story. This is by the way the second volume of Raj_Shah_7152’s MMORPG trilogy (the first being “Rebirth of the Strongest Guildmaster” and the third currently underway “Villain with the Strongest System”), but not having read the previous volume did not prevent me from enjoying this tale. Because yes, I enjoyed it.The setting, a wide universe mixing fantasy and science fiction while integrated with a MMORPG-like system called Sigma, is very well written, coherent, with many levels of underlying mysteries unveiled as the story progresses. It also evolves significantly with the actions of the characters in ways that are natural and logical.The characters are the best point of the tale, from the protagonist Max Rajput, to his brother Rudra (the protagonist of the first novel and a true deuteragonist in this second part), to their companions, families, allies, antagonists and major sides characters, each is described with a complexity in relation to their significance. None of them is all white or black, everyone believably exists in shades of gray, with their merits and flaws, the antagonists can elicit sympathy and even the main characters’ shortcoming are not hidden, as well as their consequences. Another good point is the evolution of the character, especially the MC and his entourage, they change as the story moves forward, they accumulate power in various forms and experiences gives them new perspectives. The power system is well made and coherent, resembling a RPG with levels, tiers of power (from 0 to 9) with stats, skills and mastery levels. But what differentiates the main character from the rest is how he progresses in this system, more than the quite small cheat he gets as a regressor/reincarnator at the beginning. His advantage is mostly built with his hard work and suffering.The story is the final strong point of the novel, as Raj Shah gives us a true rolllercoaster of a story with action, intrigue, a bit of kingdom building (the shallowest part), romance (the harem part is well written) and comedy. It is not the best I’ve read, but it’s very good.The writing is a bit of a letdown, as it contains quite a number of mistakes, typos and misspelling, at least one per chapter, sometimes more, even by the end of the novel. Honestly, the author should get a proofreader. The style itself is on the other hand quite good and dynamic.So, despite the mouthful of a title, MMORPG: Rebirth of the Strongest Vampire God is a very good story with a fine setting, excellent characters, logical power system and a dynamic style of writing with sadly a serious need of a proofreader. My final verdict is a low 9 out of 10 (with a high 9 if the novel was to be corrected one day). Raj Shah certainly deserves praises as a great author and I will certainly read the last part of his trilogy once it is completed (although I’m not sure I will go read the first part, as part of it has already been spoilt for me), or I might for another of his tales in a different setting. Kergonan out.

Nice story. Good writing style. Story development is little bit poor. Characters are good. Scenes are not properly explained. Many times skipped.

not for me harem and just pretty basic Chinese fic so boring and cliche if you've read a few already if you haven't there still just better ones to read

So let’s review this story, I’ll be honest the story ain’t exactly groundbreaking in any way, however I still do enjoy it a bit. My main problems with the story mostly comes from the lack of editer, I’m not sure if it’s just me, but I feel the stories writing feels incredibly hectic at points, not in a fast paste way, but just jumping really quickly between various actionsThe characters are shockingly more fleshed out than your typical wuxia novel which is honestly surprising to me so kudos to you on that Game mechanics are iffy at best and awful at worst, I generally dislike the perma death game thing that a few novels have, xp distribution is also a bit questionable. I feel like author could have benefitted from just making it a system novel with a gate system like “super gene”My best suggestion to you author would be find a friend you trust to give an honest opinion and make him proof read it a little bit

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Very engaging read the author give emotion to the MC in a positive way and builds his character properly in my eyes. Definitely recommend to anyone looking to try it out. Also I really love this modern weapons in another world stories but they always get dropped so keep it up!

Let's start with your writing quality. Maybe my standards are too high, but your sentences are too long (some parts are honestly unnecessary) and some phrases are misplaced. I suggest you read about grammar rules on misplaced modifiers. You should also edit your usage of punctuations, so you can seperate your long sentences better. You're also somehow using some words wrongly.For example in first chapter:"Is that anyway to talk to me? I remind you that without me you would be nothing!"You can rewrite it as:"Is that how you're supposed to talk to me? Let me remind you, you would be nothing without me!"There are more errors, but I'll move on to the next.Story Development. The reason why he died is because he wanted to end the contract. So they blackmail him, then they kill him and the reason is too shallow-- he wanted to end the contract. Since this is under realistic fiction, he will only be blacklisted at most or more blackmail will be used. To make it better, why don't you add more enmity for the main lead. You also didn't mention how he adjusted and stuff.Character design. It's a bit confusing to read since the personality of other's aren't that distinct. But it's okay. World Background. It's somehow clear. Overall, it's good.

Perhaps one of the best novels which are now on going. Even though the background is in stem punk kind of world with lot of fantasy involved, the novel satisfies majority of readers who are into slice of life, comedy, dark themed, rank promotion etc.World background is full of mysteries which keep unravelling as you move along the story.Slice of life: Klen's family setting, later down the story the characters around him were written in manner by author that you can actually feel their life vividly. Comedy: Klen himself does alot. Major contribution is definitely Russell's pages and other parts.Dark themed: Author I believe did a lot research on how industrialisation effected the people under the poverty line. He describes their stories in a heart touching manner.Action: Definitely a good amount. He presents perfect amount of action, not too much or not too less.Horror and Gore: This I believe there is no need to mention.Rank promotion: The sequences. These are definitely a novel and very imaginative idea by author.There are still more if you can dig. These are the only things I can think of for now. The author will definitely make anticipate for more of the story. As far as I have read I can assure you that this novel will never bore you.