Chained Freedom

Splendid story. I hope to see the continuation of this hidden gem. Was instantly hooked from the first chapter. It’d be a shame to stop. Don’t let your fans down.

I like the story, I like the characters, i like the plot,i l like this concept. But i hate one thing. Writing quality, it is more worse than a mtl. So bad translation...

I give this the big good award. Writing quality - havent found any grammar mistakes so 5/5 thereStory development - i like how the pacing has been til chap 15, not to fast and not too slow. just hope he doesnt skip his childhood years like so many others do. Character design - they're good... it seems like. tho that might change once there are more characters introducedWorld Background - sort of uniqe? idk it seems familiar but also not, but i dont have anything bad to say about it so its atleast good enoughlooking forwards to read this book. The only thing i might not like about it is that the system is not universal for everyone, then it feels like way to much of a cheat in my opinion. however i wont drop a good book because of something like that. Gl with your writing author :D

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"You're just mad you don't have them," Sasuke sniffed with a proud expression.

Thinking about this, Ting Mei quickly dissipated her dark thoughts and chose to trust this man, letting her guard down.

Again Ara translated. Magnler felt a bit sorry for her, always having to communicate for him and FTL.

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