Bloodlust. (Capsaicin x Prune Juice)

I wrote this, and I agree. It's around 200 words, which is way not enough. My next chapters will be longer (at least 1k words average) but this was a kind of prologue that I might change later when I have more time. But thanks for the honest feedback :)

Brock: Wait Ash

"I just miss you so much babe. I can't help but to stare at you!" Tanging sagot niya.

<p>"I heard your uneven heart beat, are you okay" she said then touches Grane chest to calm his heart.</p>

I'm scared. I'm absolutely frightened. Utterly terrified.

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Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

And all that glitters is gold

Hey guys! Your lovely neighborhood editor here :P. Zhanye got drunk last night, so today's chapter is going to be late. If there is one at all. So if your reading this thank you for patience and understanding. ^_^

Excellent novel although it's still in it's initial stages it has huge potential. Definitely recommend to read this novel. The Details are good too. Keep up the good work Author 👍

This is a xianxia inspired novel taking elements from modern day system rpg elements. Very promising start and the grammar is good, I hope the quality remains the same

looks promising hopefully it's keeps my attention because the synopsis is good 👍