BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

my problem with this novel is that the novel has 50% mc pov and 50% other unnecessary detailed story telling,it's just not good with the pacing,so many unnecessary pov killed the joy for me.Otherwise a pretty good story and new ideas.Just the story pacing is too slow for me.

could have became my best novel .
author could have not wasted that much chapters for some side story that i felt bored .after this beast horde part somehow make mc go to different country where he can grow fast atleast  faster than in current country he lives in

let's get a general overview. the story is set in a futuristic world with flying cars, robots, and advanced technology. in this world, everyone has a brain crystal that gives them superpowers.
our young protagonist, Erik is a bullied student with an F rank power who discovers a system that turns his life around.
the world building is intricate to say the least. Pilgrim doesn't spare any effort when It comes to descriptions and paints a vivid image of the background in your head. his words flow together beautifully.
the story starts out nice and slow, it doesn't rush the reader nor is it stressful on them. not much can be said about it as of now, it's still a bit early, but there are some rather exciting upcoming arcs which I'm looking forward to.
updating stability is excellent too, a solid two chapters everyday.
i would say Pilgrim's writing style could use a bit of work though, so could his character design. we'll certainly see improvements in the future.
all in all a 10/10 for system lovers, if you're not reading, then i don't know what you're doing :3

My only problem is that, sometimes I forgot who is the mc here due to multiple pov.

the mc is too timid , mentally unstable , stupid , and a coward he claimed he had and too prideful and dark

Very good world building. But I am 100 chapter in and barely anything has happened. I have to drop it just cause of how slow paced it is. No one cares about all these side characters.