Beyond the Primordial Dao

I was initially interested in this novel, and I read to chapter 182. I enjoy reading slice of life system novels. However, this novel took a very weird turn.When the main character first got the system, the system told him that there wouldn't force him to do anything dangerous. However, all of a sudden there is now a life or death competition against other system holders? Wasn't this supposed to be a slice of life pet store novel? Why did it change so fast?Normally I wouldn't care all that much about this competition, but the problem is the main character literally has no reason nor motivation to participate in this. The only reason he is the owner of a pet shop is because his parents died, and so he wanted to take over. The reason the main character started capturing this mystical pets is basically, "why not?".Anyway, this story is pretty slow. The main character focuses on the mystical pets he has 100% of the time, why is kinda disappointing for a pet store owner that has 10 - 30 pets and only focusing on three of them. (So far) Normally in a story like this, you'd expect a lot of cute moments, because well, the main character owns a pet store. However, those are far and wide, nowhere to be seen. The story is extremely slow and repetitive, to the point of annoyance. However, this novel does have some good comedy. Like when the main character implied communism would be a good idea. The translation quality of this novel is pretty mid. Everything is understandable, but they randomly change the names of various characters/pets. It's extremely confusing because they literally have two different names for a character in a single chapter.Overall, the novel is decent, but the fact that the author drones on and on about random stuff really makes this novel too slow to bear. I am unsure why they put a action-plot in a slice of life novel, but whatever.

Review after thoroughly reading the first four chapters btw won't spoil anything so don't worry :) (not memeing or anything gonna be real)first: lucan is going to make river of blood flow (obv the blood will be of his enemies)second: potential lover is a beauty unlike none has seen before (everyone's little brother whistles)third: the setting is insane (just like all the other mlb novels :D)fourth: from the name I can just guess that hero's are in for it (hopefully crazy killing happens lol) well that's it go vote

This is stupid but if  you don't have anything more interesting to do  you could give it a try.Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzbzndjsnznznnznznsnsnsnnsnsnsnsnsnsnsnzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Gotta give some motivation so here’s your gold star. ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-

The grammar has its issue but overall the story is great. I'd appreciate if the author improved his writing but apart from that am rooting for this book, added to my library.

I very much enjoy this story so far but I’m wondering will he always be super inferior or that kinda what I get the feel from him or will he have something happen to him that makes him super good. All I see for him the the foreseeable future is him falling way behind?

interesting.............................

Li Mai: Then,where is it??