Ive gotta be honest but, is it just me or im feeling more dumb as i read this novel ? The quality of the content by that i mean as i read this i cant help it but notice there are lot of mistakes here and there at some point it rivals some of the mtl ive read i dont know about others but iive elt like it needs to be re written honestly the plot is a lil cloudy for me due to it
well i can say i have read worse.but there aren't many that are worst.about the mc in the first few chapters he is more or less afraid of woman.because of almost R*ape in his first life. the next chapters after this rape becomes a main theme.later when he decide he want to do somthing about it, the system forces him for *** with a rando woman.currently chapter 56 he wants a harem because he was a neet anime manga lover.the story arcs are short.half of the chapters are almost filled with the system look.at chapter 56 i'm wondering why there are so many that want more chapters.but not me so i'm dropping this
Its trash. Not only is it cliche, but the translation is garbage. For Example, 11 somehow = 100. Makes sense! The development is garbage, and extreamly cliche with a disgusting perverted mc. The character design is also extreamly cliche, and perverted. The MCs sole goal is to make a 3000 strong harem, which is DISGUSTING. There is almost no background to the world, and it makes no sense. Also his system is weird af.
Aside from the typical arrogant dad and the young master who lusts for beauty, this novel is decent. Very similar to the kar98k novel but with a system and can detect hidden gunmen in the dark just from the advanced knowledge. it still 20 chapters so i hope it wont go decent to worse.
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