this is literally just a ripoff of a Korean novel, author was confused on which parts to copy and make original so nothing makes sense in the story or synopsis
give us moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
As the first review, I must say that the novel can be great and the writing quality is there. I think if the paragraphs were a bit shorter sometimes it would probably gain traction very fast!
I love the way you write! The story is well-paced, and I like how the scenes are written and described. Especially how you described what the protagonist was feeling along with the well-written dialogue, this is a good read! Keep it up! ^^
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