Battle Royale of the Sinners

"Battle Royale of the Sinners" is a thought-provoking and haunting novel that delves into the dark recesses of humanity, exploring the consequences of societal decay and the innate capacity for both good and evil within each of us. Set in a dystopian future, the story revolves around a twisted experiment where teenagers are forced to fight to the death, a brutal metaphor for the battle between their own moral compasses and the corrupting influences surrounding them.

The novel challenges readers to confront uncomfortable truths about the nature of sin, redemption, and the resilience of the human spirit. It raises questions about the origins of evil, whether it's an inherent part of our nature or a product of societal pressures, and the blurred lines between innocence and guilt. The characters, each with their own backstory, are complex and relatable, making their struggles and sacrifices all the more poignant.

"Battle Royale of the Sinners" serves as a grim reminder of the potential for violence and desperation when society fails to provide guidance and support. Yet, amidst the brutality, there are glimmers of hope as characters strive for camaraderie, compassion, and a sense of humanity amidst the chaos. Ultimately, the novel forces us to ponder our own capacity for survival, empathy, and the power of choice in defining who we are in the face of adversity.

In a human tone, "Battle Royale of the Sinners" is a chilling yet compelling tale that provokes introspection and leaves a lasting impression on the reader, encouraging empathy and reflection on the darkest corners of our collective conscience.

I'm going to put my humble self at average 3 stars because I'm not shameless enough to show off my broken English and cringe worthy of terrible grammar I put into this novel.

I promise that I will trying my best to keep up with at least one chapter a day. Eventhough it took me two freaking days to come up with the first chapter.

For some reason, every times I reread my work, I ended up fixing things here and there. 10 drafts later, I still found flaws and kept deleting this line and added this line. 20 hours later, I was banging my head against the wall and gave up rechecking the quality and post it here right away.

Please have mercy on this poor soul and go easy on me ... MEAW!

This isn't your typical reincarnation story. Which is pretty great in my opinion. If you enjoy stories about war or anything related to the romance of the three kingdoms. You would enjoy this story despite its flaws. The main character isn't extremely over powered and the author was able to devise a proper balancing mechanic in the beginning. If I only read the first half of the story I would've of given it a 5.0. The reason why I had to rate it a lower level is because of several reasons.

The first reason is the main character is starting to become a different person. In the beginning of the story you are introduced to a main character that understand he isn't a genius. He has to be cautious and mindful of all his actions. Its the reason why he spent so much time and effort to recruit capable strategists. He gathers information, asks for opinions before he makes any major decisions. Yet, now the main character no longer asks for their opinions and makes rash decisions.

The second reason is the main character doesn't exactly understand how the mechanisms of this world actually work. Neither does his lover who was a demon from hell. Her mother does and shes currently in the world as well. If it was the former main character after he discovered she was in this world he would've of asked her how the rules of the world work in order to make himself stronger and used this advantage against other sinners. But this hasn't happened which makes it even more infuriating!

The third reason is a pretty big one. You know whats worse than a omnipotent and omniscient main character? An omnipotent and omniscient antagonist. Don't you love novels when the antagonist/s is able to predict, anticipate and convince every other person in the world to go after the main character for no reason at all?  Whats the likelihood a person in modern earth would have extensive knowledge of the waring states in china? Unless you are obsessed with dynasty warriors, a war tactics addict or dramas from this period its very unlikely. Yet the remaining sinners are all quite knowledgeable about this period. Hell even the former antagonist that was the sole mortal enemy to the main character was. Which wouldn't make any sense with his backstory.

The fourth reason is the novel no longer has any "balance." In the beginning of the novel we had a system where you'd lose lifespan when you used a skill. The "players" in the world had a advantage over the natives because of their skills, but they had to pay in lifespan. For example one of the sinners has a skill that can can create anything. From skills from other people, to gold, to even clones of other people. He can literally make anything. How the **** is this even legal. No, how isn't this person dead already. This isn't a skill its a goddamn console command. The author is nerfing the main character while buffing his opponents. Did the main character end up playing ******** mode?

The fifth reason is the current plot has become so convoluted it can be frustrating for a new reader to get into the novel. A perfect example is in the story we learn that heaven and hell exists. You have angels and demons and humans can become either one after they die depending on their karma. So in that case what the hell is a cultivator? Is he just a angel than because he has angel wings? Why is he trying to turn the native population in world into angels? Why is it possible for a sinner to become a angel? With all their negative karma aren't they more suited to become demons instead? Wasn't the reason why they came into the world was so wash away their sins? Wasn't the reason they came into this world in the first place? But now without completing the game they can just become angels?! Why isn't their a demon trying to turn the native population into demons? We learn that heaven and hell went to war, but we don't know the reason. We haven't had any chapters dedicated to it either.  

I'm not trying to be nitpicky I actually want the author to succeed. Hes working hard and hes pretty dedicated and it sucks to see the novel in such low rankings. In my honest opinion this novel probably needs a remake to make it more palatable to new audiences. The karma thing you had with the main character and the dead antagonist would've of been more interesting. For example after he died his soul could have ended up corrupting or taking over another sinner making that person want to kill the main character for revenge. Or he could've been consumed by his heart devil in his lust for power. Maybe he could've of corrupted the angel? The angel seems to have potential to be the final boss, but in current plot shes just a minor villain which really wastes her potential. I really enjoy your other novel by the way. You might want to rename it and give it a better cover I'm sure you'd get a lot more interest that way. Its a shame you need to focus on this one more.

This is a very addicting  book.Best book on  heaven hell and  redemption. This fully  brings out your  inner  Angel demon.it also  teaches history in a fun way. This is  a  book for the  strong  not the weak. I also know  how  many  souls of  sin and  souls  of  virtues I have. I hope  the  author  finishes  it quickly  but I will  give him the time he needs

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-Trully, underated.- Hidden gem-

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○The concept of the story is amazing, and the protagonist is not bound to just one set of abilities.
○The reason of reincarnation is justified. (Explained)
○The historical facts are interesting, good, and not anoying (as there is no overflow of info either) -
○Relatable MC (extra-super bonus point)
○Halfish.. korean-chinise style of writing... ? Idk-just me
○Almost to none-to no brain dead f•ing 'young master'type-people
○Reliable update speed (1/day)
○No iritating plot armor
○System/halfish system story

This novel is the Most and interesting I ever read upon and I even spend $90 jus to unlock chapters cause is fOOKING worth it!!! Long Live Immortal Tong!!!!! Hope the next chapter came out asap!!

This novel is too underrated. This deserved more attention and support from readers around the world. I love how you could make me hate a character at the first few chapter then gradually make me like the character as more chapters pass. Damn! I need more!