At the Edge of the Abyss

The mc starts of strong, pragmatic and grounded. Then he gets a fairy guide and turns into a weak, scatterbrained moron.I liked the initial 25 or so chapters of the story, but with the complete 180 in personality and competence, it began to just grind on my nerves.It showed in the fights of chapter 28 and 29, then with him going from a hoarder on the avarage skyrim player level in chapter to some moron at chapter 30 who doesn't want to pick up loot because he doesn't use those items... When he's carrying a back full of junk items to sell... And needing his fairy guide to point out the obvious in a ridiculing manner, I dropped It.The way I see it, it's like two people worked on this story, the first 25 chapters or so were by a person who liked to write a competent story but lost interest.And the second by a person who had a total thing for the usual incompetant characters who need minders to tell their left hand from their right, along with tropes and clichés.Its like seeing a high rated Litrpg novel start, only to have some weebo wanting it into some kind of mix wuxia / harem anime hybrid.Perhaps the story was written by copy pasting events from other novels, then having the patchwork rewritten as one thing to make it a whole, without keeping the character and his personality in mind.That's not a bad way to write a new story, after all originality these days is just well stolen concepts applied in uncommon ways, but the loss of sight of the character's original engaging personality causing it to be exchanged for a moron with an overbearing fairy who needs to hold his hand lest he trips over his own feet is not cool.I think I would be much more interested in the story if the MC was more consistent in his character.

Such successful writting.. is indeed creative.. its like living up you dream... then story seem to use lust as the way to do vengence... disguising from its real purpose... *** is indeed a gift yet comafluage it with intent is a different story.... great story then..

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go author you can do this ill wait for the next chapter even if it take months,just don't drop this ,there so much hypnosis genre here but so little are nice

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Different and funny. exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.

The story has great potential and is really immersive. The concept, the characters, and the world is something you really enjoy and the story starts off strong. I would recommend this story

im absolutely loving it so far and i really hope this wonderful gem doesn't get dropped especially when tge story is starting to really pick up and go places