Apocalypse Reborn Villainess's Evil Fat Brother

the battle with the monks is amazing, keep it coming.

Love it, love our protagonist he's someone you want to see succeed

If you think this is another wuxia trope full of cliche stereotypes, then you're completely right - BUT with the exception that the author has used a nice twist on each of the cliche. Trash MC that cant cultivate, but then magically solves his physique problems? Got it, but it takes a long time, and as of chapter 170, he's still struggling with it. Childhood fiance that comes to break up the engagement? Got it, but then due to righteousness sticks with the MC, as it would go against her values to go against her father's arrangement and kick a person just because he's down. Arrogant sect comes to take revenge after a few insignificant disciples being beaten (and thus in their eyes being humiliated)? Got it, but then the sect comes to apologise after learning that it was actually their disciples that were in the wrong.So yup, full of cliches, but they're refreshing. Another thing that's refreshing is the eccentric and very humoristic characters in the story. Yea, again, they're cliche, but they're pretty funny, and they each have their small quirk. Although the characters aren't that developed, it's a huge improvement to character development compared to many many other Chinese novels out there, where sometimes sidecharacters don't even have a sentence to describe them.Though full of mild praise, the world background is pretty convoluted, and the reader is only introduced to a small area of the world as you go along. Although this avoids information dumps, after 100+ chapters, it's pretty hard to figure out where the MC is in this world, and what the world actually looks like. On the topic of convoluted, the martial system is pretty difficult to understand, he opens meridians to advance, but there are never give  a clear explanation to as what element meridians belong to which level or how many meridians he should open of each. Things are kind of mentioned on the fly, making the read just having to deal with it by accepting it. E.g., suddenly the author could mention, "now I've broken through the water meridian and opened my acupuncture, I'm now 1 step close to the martial warrior stage". Great, but how does this work? How many acupuncture do you have to open? What elements are there? Etc. Just reading about it, makes it all seem so messy - where if the author explained the system proactively, the reader would be able to keep track of the MCs progress.Another thing is the release stability - pretty damn horrible I'd say. Last release (as of writing) was 10 days ago, and before that it was pretty spotty with around a new chapter every 4~9 days. This really sucks, especially when this a really unique wuxia novel that does it's best to stand out from the crowd. So @translator, if you cant do your job stably, give it to someone else, hire more help, or give a clear message on what readers can expect from you. It says 8 chapters a week, but you're FAR from fulfilling that!Regarding the translation quality, there are some mistakes in both translation and grammar. Move over, there are mistakes in for example translating key information like the martial warrior stages, where one stage is used twice. Big no no, that a basic proof read should have caught.Overall, interesting story, funny characters with a world that feels developed. I hope that there will come a main heroine soon to bring some romance into the story, and a reveal of a deeper plot, which it really needs. So far the author has tried to hold back on filler chapters, but the translator stability and quality is a downside. I'd give the story 4.5/5, but the translator is bringing this story down by a notch. TL;DR: Give it a go, if you like wuxia novels and you're looking for something refreshing with a different spin.

Has potential but the grammar is so disturbingExample: Zhang Yihan sat up, and turned on the lamp and took a look. There was nothing special on the desk except for the stone he picked upThe stone was walking on his way home after school at night and suddenly hit him from the skyChapter 2-----_- the stone was walking (the hell?)Would have beet better if this was TLed properly..This would easily break through 5m views here.Was this MTLed? I never read MTLed novels before but I think this is it.I thought people were joking when they said MTLed novels can make you suffer when reading but they were right.

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Well written but excruciatingly uninteresting. As usual this novel is very generic and doesn't even attempt to distinguish itself from every other simulator novel out there but that isn't my biggest gripe with this.Ever since the MC simulated the life where he writes a novel, everything feels incredibly bloated, boring and unnecessarily detailed. I don't mind the whole novel writing gimmick, what I do mind is that you could have condensed all of that nonsense into 3 chapters easily.I for the first time ever in a trial read very quickly skimmed through most of it but unsurprisingly lost none of the essence of what happened. This novel's unjustifiably enormous self indulgence is baffling and just ruined whatever little it had going for it. 0.25/5.

Haven't even began to read it yet but I can instantly see how horrible the grammar is in the synopsis.If you can't use English well then don't make a story with it.

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