Anti-Cheater Strategies

It was really fun reading this novel, not bad for a novel written for the first time but it needs improvements in the scientist area where is the scientific aspect in this story?

truthfully the people in this novel are straight up annoying and i would love to bash them and tell them to scram, i mean why the hell are u guys coming to his house as if its your? i hate them. and they are shameless to the core if only these few annoying people can be removed then it can be really awesome. on the other hand the novel is alright apart from the above mentioned problems and it's an enjoyable read so far.

Ok, I am just genuinely impressed with the writing quality here. As an English major, I've been stuck reviewing so many books that have such a trash writing quality that I literally wanted to rip my hair out, but guess what? This book is literally perfect in the sense that it has no spelling or grammar mistakes at all, truly impressive. Now, off of that topic, the story development and character design are good so far, but not anything too special and the world is somewhat the same as some other novels, so I'm waiting to see if there will be some uniqueness that the writer can come up with. Overall, a good read that I would casually recommend.

So like he has multiple different abilities but they apparently are just filler text because he doesn't really make good use of them, the author gives him certain abilities like the gamers mind yet he still passes out from fear of heights and other such things so it's like he doesn't even have it. The author writes in big blocky paragraphs making it hard to read. Overall there is so many inconsistencies, inconveniences(the paragraph size and punctuation), and even though the mc has apparently trained he still basically comes off as weaker than Ron. The only thing really going for the story is the amount of chapters and the update frequency. While I personally liked the premise of the story, and the general abilities he got, its sadly ruined by how the mc uses (or doesn't use) his abilities, and the way the mc acts.

"Why would I run away like coward? No! This is my home, this is my place. Hear me, brother. I will get back what I deserve!"

"This is only a skill that a thorny flower who had reached level 4 [Thorny Flower Overlord] could do. Even when a [Spitting Thorny Flower] evolved into a level 2 [Carnivorous Thorny Flower] or a level 3 [Giant Thorny Flower], it still wouldn't have the [Spore] ability. Only when it has reached level 4 and became a [Thorny Flower Overlord], it could disperse its parasitic [Spores].(TLN: I wanna be, the very best…) These spores would stick on corpses and turn them into [Spitting Thorny Flowers]. If the opponent was a living person, the the spores would enter into the person and devour his internal organs, sucking in his blood. Then it will evolve into a [Carnivorous Thorny Flower] and came out from the person's body by tearing his stomach apart." When Lin Yang explained it in that way, the little miss could only cringe as she was unable to endure it anymore.

'am I right Naruto?'

atmosphere could be seen clear as day to them all.