The Storyline is FASCINATING. I Can't Able To Stop myself from Reading it. (But well, had to pause when I remembered my study work.) But this Novel is Really Truly Great. I'm Looking forward to it. Really Great. Great Work Author. I Love it!
Hello everyone, author here. I'd just like to say thank you for all the support. Honestly, the story just went from having a few readers to getting much more. I know full well that I may not be the idle author - some may like how I write and some may dislike it. At the end of the day, it's your choice. I love writing too much to be bothered by that sort of thing. Honestly, it would not surprise me if majority of the readers get annoyed. I don't want to write something common and predictable. I want to write and love to write things that are harmonious and chaotic at the same time - that what I hope for at least. As I've said before, I'm unorthodox and a bit nuts in the head.[Sorry about that] ;pOnly thing I want is constructive criticism, things that will make me better and hopefully the story as-well. Or just post about the things that you didn't like/ obvious errors and such. I read every comment you guys post, go ahead and flame me for that matter, I'll filter out the good from the bad and hopefully make something even better for you guys instead. P.S: I've gone back and slowly begun rewriting the previous chapters; bear with me and hopefully one day, we can all laugh about this journey. (Shout out to the people who were here from the beginning, I love you all and promise to become better.)
Tiene una interesante idea como inspiración, pero siento que no la esta llevando por un buen camino, espero que comience a enderezar la historia y saque capítulos mas seguido, eso atraera a muchos lectores
Please, if someone is selling guns, sell them to this author so he can put himself out of his misery, i mean why ****q do you even write with this standard of english? How old are you, dont you have anything better to do than torture people with you lack of imagination, your overflowing **** hormons are screaming lust in every single chapter, go jerk of or something seriously. I seriously wanted to give this book a chance because i try my best to be partial and rational and can even ignore poor english if story is good, but this doesnt even deserve 1/5, its just a plain 0000, go learn english and perhaps finish grade school before you start writting again?
I read up to chapter 210 and was sadly disappointed by the MC's cowardice.spoilerHe had an uchiha friend who later in the story was killed in the massacre, something the MC could have avoided, but he chose not to go save and collect sharigan, he even had the audacity to stand in front of her grave and pretend to be sad . What good are all these training arcs if he can't even save a friend (try)? The fanfic is good but the MC is one of those emotionless MC's that just runs after their goals without even looking at their childhood friends or teammates.
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