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I expected a better novel from Feng Qingyang previous novel "War Sovereign Soaring the Heavens" looks like he still can't change his writing style.People comments and Useless narrations make up for 70% of the novelWell I wonder who has so much interest to read so much of useless ****.
If this VR game is actually connected to reality like other VR novels: 'I Became the Ultimate Boss', then It will be very interesting since that means MC will also become a god in reality (or at least can affect the real world). But if MC's godhood is only in VR then, meh... I am already bored with those pure VR genres where MC only shines inside VR.
Reading this book reminds me of "Sign In Buddha's Palm". They have different concept and story but similarities are there. For example- the late arrival of the Golden Finger, the story starts with Buddhism, close with a younger sister, the MC are patient and smart but they have a deep obsession. SIBP's mc want to achieve immortality while LLE's mc want to take everything that belongs to him back.All in all, the two books are very good to me. They deserve full stars.
WTF dude !! the guys father dies and he all cool "let him die" attitude .and goes to participate in a tournament in along with the people who killed his father.let not forget that mc has spuer strong helper who could have saved his father but just watched him die you got no sense of writing dude
So far, after 24 chapters, a decent story, that’s interesting and enjoyable to read the most part.The story feels neither rushed or like it it’s dragging its feet, and there have been no major info dumps so far at least.Though you should prepare yourself for some spelling erro and wonky grammar here and there, but author is often quick to correct or address them when pointed out. If none of that is turning you off, you should give it a try, you might like it.
The narrative is solid, but one aspect that doesn't sit well with me is how noticeable the plot armor is, especially when the protagonist, despite not being inherently powerful, seems to escape unscathed. It's particularly evident when her partner, who possesses remarkable strength, effortlessly dispatches all foes with a single hit. This creates a discernible reliance on plot armor that feels a bit too apparent for my liking.
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