Overall this novel is fking good. Since theres a paywall, why not hire an editor? Theres alot of editors and proofreaders online you can hire. Just check on Reddit. Its one of the good reincarnation novel around. Dont let grammar spoils the novel.
I like such storys normally I just have a slight Problem with how they kill normally since if he is killing with Rebound damage doesn't he only need to stop attacking to not get killed and after healing come again?
The MC is an immortal from the immortal world who suffered some kind of accident that caused him to die and transmigrate/reincarnate into the body of a fat loser high school senior on earth. MC uses his superior immortal knowledge to accelerate his cultivation and beat his peers. MC is cold and indifferent, except to his sister and loves drooling over women. Note: There are a lot of cliches, such as face slapping, annoying stuck up white skin and big boob beauties, jealous young masters, and justice for any grievances.
the romance was incredibleslow but steady and no haremthe story is boring at the start but starts going after that. arount chp 100, it gets really interesting
This good is pretty good. Of all of the books I've read this would be the third best. It has kind of alot of action which makes it interesting and the legendary swords he gets do sound appealing. So this book is actually really good.
I just really hate that all of theese evolution novels have the main characters become pussies. This book had some really good potential but it ruined it like all the other cliché and ****ty books
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