A Young Wizard's Journey - Order of The Phoenix

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very well done, this is defiantly my pick this month.                                                                                               

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I really think this story has so much potential. I like it so far. I think if the author could improve a few things, it would be more appealing to readers. First of all, the tenses need to be unified, either past or present. Some editing needs to be done as there are many grammatical mistakes. I think there should be more character development, maybe backgrounds, goals, motivation. Something that kinda bothered me was the fact that the author uses both first and last name every time he talks about a characters. I think one is enough, also descriptions are lacking. Great work though, I am sure you will improve with time!! Gambatte kudasai!!

Hi all, This book is awesome and fabulous explanation about pandemic comparison.I saved it in my library list.eagerly waiting to know more about it

A new novel - Eastern fantasy. There are pluses, there are minuses. This is an honest review.The quality of the text block, you can give 5 stars, is easy to read, almost everything is clear. Interestingly written, even fascinating.Updates are ongoing, 2-3 chapters sometimes. If the author manages to maintain this pace for 2-3 months, then he deserves praise. While he succeeds. Bravo! 5 stars.The development of history - is dynamic, but sometimes there are jumps from one topic to another IMHO of course, 5 starsBut the character’s character is not clearly spelled out, it is not clear what his character traits, what emotions, who he is at all, what kind of person he is, what he lives with? 4 stars.The world - it is not described in detail, at first you can’t understand where the actions take place, in what time, era, how this world looks like? What is special about it? But, somewhere in the middle of the 15-20th chapter, the world is partially clarified, simply by pointing to oriental fiction. Such worlds have already been described in a dozen novels of a similar genre. Therefore, also 3 stars.Plus the novel, reading it is fascinating, sometimes intriguing, although sometimes reading the beginning, the end can be predicted.The quality of writing is good. There are some original points, finds.Cons - The novel is replete with cliches inherent in the stories of this genre. Originality, thoughts are not always shown, there are compilation of plots.In general, I liked the novel, I read it regularly, included it in my library. If you have nothing to read, and you like the genre of oriental fiction, not too fans, then a very good novel to read.Thanks to the author for his work! Much has been written, and with a good text block, updates are regular without interruptions, it costs a lot. Really cool!respectfully

I've never read anything like this before. it got me thinking. This is fun to read, very unique. Amazing world background development, amazing update stability amazing characteristic design, writing quality and story development.😫 I really like it. 100% recommend. 🥰Please continue updating. 😊