As someone who caught up to the most recent chapter , this novel is decent . it has a great concept but its poorly executed. This is the type of novel you read when you are bored and dont think too much into what you read. Also the fight scene are below average at best. The concept of laws were annoying. The author keeps mentioning laws but never explains what they are or how they help in battles. There are different levels of laws but its never explained why a heavenly law is better than an earthly laws. All we know is the heavenly laws are better and that’s it. The avatar art is never truly explained . All i know is that he makes avatars and the benefits are increased qi reserves, improved comprehension speed and the all share the same mind, so they are share the same techniques. But whats confusing is how they are made and why can’t high level Martial artist tell that the person they are talking to is an avatar. Also when the avatars cultivates their bodies, is the same benefits shared with the rest of the avatars or with just the main body.Like i said great concept , terrible execution . READ ONLY IF YOU ARE BORED.
This is basically just brain/eye candy for people who love op protagonists. This book is under appreciated. It is a fairly fast pased novel that always keeps you wanting more.
Ironically that I am giving my own book a review but I have something important for all to know...I am currently 12 years old. It's 2018. I am in school so I usually only release 2 chapters in each holiday but sometimes I write in math class... As a 12 year old I this is my first time writing a proper book. Each chapter I write should have slightly more words than the last. I accept all comments but no spam. Thank you for reading my book.
Started out a copy then rough but ultimately a gem........ can’t waitTo keep reading moaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar!
Overall if you looking for the equivalent to fast food, this is fine. There is lots of power fantasy, future knowledge, super strong follower and no mishaps. 21 chapters in, the writing quality pretty decent but marked low by the constant loopholes/plot armor. The MC goes from being a frail/dumb/cowardly character to a untouchable god(due to constant plot armor/who is lead by a slavelike/fanboy demon he got from his gambling system(even though gluttony has nothing to do with gambling/minions).
To be honest, i really do spammed a lot, i feel bad for author lol. This is definitely a cheat code, greater than any cheat available in the cultivation world. That's all i want to say but how many words do i have to type to post a review?u200d
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