Honestly, captivating. Very interesting though I’ll probably reduce the big words or should I say words used to describe the feelings or technicalities. All in all a solid 10. Very well done.
There is seemed to be an issue in Chapter 76. From the Chapter 75, it jumped to Chapter 77. Some readers might not get the following scene on Chap 77 but I am now communicating with my editor about this. I’m just waiting for her reply. Thank you and I’m very sorry for the inconveniences!
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The main story was a good idea but then it jumps all over the place. None of it seems to come together. I'm halfway through the book and I still don't know what's going on with the 2 main characters or what the actual plot of the story is!
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It might take a moment for me to find and respond to your comments, but I LOVE reading your thoughts! (And as my favorite reader of my completed book "Abused Luna, Mature Alpha" learned.... you might even end up as a guest star in the book!)
Much love, Eden.