A Life so Unsettled

Hello everyone! This is an updated review after the novel was out for 6 months by now!I saw a lot of authors writing the pros and cons of their works, So I decided that it is the perfect time to do one for my novel since there is already 300+ chapter available!Pros:>Extensive and fleshed out world background that would let you immerse yourself in the world much smoothly and find the logic in it although it is a piece of fiction!>MC isn't dense, stupid, virgin. He knows his priorities and doesn't chase skirts or risk his life over stupid shit.He is lazy and doesn't like having burdens. However, he is hardworking when it is concerning his strength.He is shameless, an asshole, and a bit of a troll. But, he is serious when he had to.He isn't a white knight neither he plans to be one.>English is not the best but it's not the worst either. I make sure to edit my chapters before releasing them and always check on previous mistakes.>Updates: 2 Chapters every day with a word count ranging from 1600 to 2000.>The First Volume was my 1st ever written volume so it wasn't really the best thing that I have written. But please bear with mistakes you see or the style of writing as from 2nd volume upward, the writing just keeps getting better and better.>Give it until the 2nd volume when he enters the UVR and sees if you like it then or not. **: There are 88 chapters for free to start!>No harem.....Cons:>As I mentioned the first volume was a bit draggy than it should be and the writing wasn't the best in it.>Side Characters: I am trying my best to develop them one by one but I still prefer focusing more on the MC to keep the plot going at a faster pace. So, you can expect not much from them in those 300 chapters. (Drastic changes or something like that.)>No Harem, don't know if it is a con or pro, but I will just put it in both sections.>I have been told that my writing style is quite jarring by some readers, but I will leave you to decide that on your own....That should be it probably? If I missed anything, please write it in the comments, and please do know that I accept criticism with a thick face just make it logical and I will try my best to see what I can do about it.Thank you and I hope you join the journey with me and the rest of my lovely readers <3<3<3(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧

hmm... I wanted to try something new and it was clear that i couldn't make it.Still, it was a good learning lesson, and i will try more.Overall, i would rate my own novel as an 'OKAY' as i didn't do much of a good job, there were good chapters but also bad chapters.Still, for newcomers or new readers or those who are reading, thanks for reading it and i hope to see you in my other novelsI am new, so please show some mercy on this catNote- Also, i have been reading everyone's comment, but it seems like due to some bugs, i can't reply to you all or even put a thumbs up, so sorry if you feel offended because i didn't reply.Thank you for reading my novel

the ranking system is needlessly complicated, you could have put the same type of rankings in most of the things but it's uselessly multiplied. I have to repeatedly go to the auxiliary chapter to make sure which ranking this is so 3 star on world background for that. I actually wanted to give 2 star at first but considering you are a new author and all.... well 140 words are over long ago

This needs an editor. The constant POV switches make it hard to follow the story. Also, the MC feels a bit fake, idk, maybe I should just give this more time.

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Hello my loyal readersThis is chapter 200 celebration reviewIt has been a hell of a journey throughout these short period .. nearly month and half since i started this story. I have now written 204 chapters to the moment and nearly 320k wordsI hope u liked my novel so farNow, i want to celebrate with you. So i need your suggestions about how to do that.Would you like me to write a side story? Pnro? Or another one related to the hidden mysteries to the novel?Do you want a mass release? 10 chapters in oneday perhaps?Just tell me what do you think and i will try to make your wishes come trueI will wait for one more week then i will tell you about the final rewards i chose from your suggestionsKeep supporting me and ibro, the journey has just begunHappy journey in my novel worldThx for your support so far, it means a alot to me.

This is one of the best novel I've ever read. this story development is really good . but I've only disappointed that MC's daughter's Death. and story is really good

This might be a slightly biased review, but after hearing about this novel almost everyday for a while now, I finally read it. It's quite good! better than what I expected, and I am starting to be eager to read more of it. Before reading this work I thought it might not be my exact cup of tea, but here we are, I enjoyed it. I'm happy to support a friend, and if anyone else feels like it, I encourage doing the same. This novel deserves a chance. And it's my truest feeling if I say I am still hoping to get a physical copy one day, a signed physical copy!