A Game, A Fear, A Death

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Don't waste your time. The book is full of cliches. The story is based on WoW but a bastardized version. If you've read other MMO books then you've read this one. Ctrl C - Ctrl V but change the names a little and you have this book. It's not even trying to innovate. We also have the classic school reunion story where he got embarrassed in the past but this time he does face slapping.

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The story is lacking in emotion. I feel the MC is just a third party making comments. It's like He's not the MC but rather a side character. I'm pretty sure a side character has spoken more then he has. He also doesn't have any noticeable personality. He's kinda dumb really. All the characters are really. Their like children, even though their at least 15. It's like they can't think for themselves. Example being when asked why to become a adventurer. It all seems forced in the plot, like their forced to not think.I've only read till chapter 30 but you I see no change in the story that has hooked me. The only selling point is the genre and him potentially being a dragonking. But even that is not enough of a selling point with no fleshed out character development or world development. The only reason I've not given it a 1 star is because I didn't read the full story, but I just couldn't. 30 straight chapters with nothing interesting happening. Yeah no.Another reason is because I commend your effort you at least put in making the story. Good luck though and hope you improve.

'Ding'

I then land on the ground while it recuprates and sprint directly to it right before sending a punch directly to its face and knocking it out.

The two shower, get something to eat and then go to bed.

He noticed me packing my things. "Are you leaving already?" He asked abruptly. "Why? We're not yet finished with our project?" He continued. "My mom called me up, she want me home today. I think she really needs me at home, you know." I said without looking at him. "Ah." He just said, and then remain standing near the door. We stayed there for a moment; no one is speaking only breathing of each other can be heard.