a duelist of heart

Everyone is so knowledgeable about everything even though it’s only been a few days and they didn’t receive prior warning or anything. Not to mention, those guilds seem to be powerful right at the start but we have no idea when it was formed so it is safe to assume that they were formed right before/during the game decsended. There are multiple plot holes where the MC just magically appears somewhere. The characters talk about talents a lot like “he probably has this talent” when it’s unclear how they have this much information?? The translation quality in my opinion is like something that was MTLed and then edited a tiny bit. this basically means half the things don’t make sense.Currently on the latest chapter (60 something) and I’m going to continue reading because of the Christmas event thing and all this only costs 2 coins.

another novel and another 5 star drop review! might i say that i will not say anymore because of the five stars? ok. i will not say more. ciaaaooo

It's only the first chapter and I am already amazed with the writing style and story flow. Awesome work for a zombie apocalypse themed story!There may be a bit of problem with the separation of the paragraph and dialogues which makes it a bit confusing.Great job so far!

I read to chapter 7.I don't really read the mafia trope and don't know much, but I find the plot very unique and interesting. Especially the auctioning element. I really liked how Erika started out as a human trafficking slave. It makes their encounter very believable versus the other kinds of unrealistic meetings with mafias. Something I find inconsistent with Lacus's character is he doesn't know what he wants? Like he wants to be alone forever and remain cruel and evil, but he also wonders what it's like to have a true love? I find this contradiction repeatedly throughout the story and because of that his character isn't developed.The grammars make some parts of the story hard to follow, but I really do see potential in this novel to be something awesome!!!! 🤗

IS HE GOING TO TREAT SARA RIGHT? IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEANIS HE GOING TO TREAT SARA RIGHT? IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEANIS HE GOING TO TREAT SARA RIGHT? IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEANIS HE GOING TO TREAT SARA RIGHT? IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN

"invisible breath!!"

At home, Claridad made a delicious Filipino food for Seikatsu. After dinner, she handed some new clothes to him.

for the last time with all the strength left in my body i try say..."help"