In addition to what I consider to be common errors in this genre (lack of depth in character personality in general, rushed events in a short period of time) I think what most disappoints is that it's not really kingdom building, I mean the MC just leaves out there dominating territories and plays into the hands of his "subjects" to administer, there is no type of discussion about choosing territory for construction, economic and food problems faced. Basically another "Lord of People" with op mc without any depth in general
So this novel takes a different twist on those litrpg crafting stories. To start it off the mc is a grandpa around 65-70 i believe. And as this mc is so old it means he is very experienced. Meaning he's not some gullible, *****, mc. Right off the back that's a big plus for me. Now I dont wanna give any spoilers but I like the way a old grandpa was introduced to the game and picked up crafting of all things. Your gonna have to read to find out, but this is easily my favorite crafting litrpg. I even like it more then Master of All.
It's the best novel i have read since ..... I'm french and my english est à ses débuts... Mais franchement ce roman est juste waou !!! J'adore et j'espère que vous continuerez l'histoire jusqu'au bout. Parce que si jamais vous deviez arrêter ce serait une grande, grande déception !! Merci beaucoup de continuer et bonne journée!!! 💕
This is a truly great story i love there is finally a novel like this one and i truly hope this masterpiece doesnt get dropped Everyone you really must try this out
personally the pacing to the story is a bit wrong as well as the mc and his powers and stuff just don't seem to mesh well with everything I believe that the story just doesn't flow together correctly but I do believe that should it go through a rewrite with a proofreader to help get the flow on track it will be wonderful
I have also read the novel you have taken inspiration from and I must say the quality of your novel matches my expectations.Really good.Awesome novel.Keep it up!Also do try to not go down the path of that novel where plot development was basically almost gone towards the end.Though fluff always keeps you hooked I guess 😃
i like the duality of the MC and the story so far. it doesn't have too many system window notifications but it's brought up every few chapters.the dream segments are quite annoying, if he's that worried about home then can always use the necklace to see if she's ok....the constant changing of character perspective happens randomly and should flow better.overall the story is good. i enjoy it.
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