Will You Marry Me

This novel is... something else entirely. My main issue is that the author contradicts themselves continuously through the novel. The biggest example is the world. The author talks up this world where everyone is a 100x more intelligent than they are today, technology is very very advanced, and the MC is extra hard working (making him smarter than the average person).  However, it's like everyone lacks common sense, especially the MC! He can remember obscure facts that he read in a book years ago, but it takes ~150 chapters and an advanced level teacher for him to think "wow maybe my skill can be used in ways that aren't described in a textbook." He is genuinely mind blown that he can use his modeling ability for things other than modeling buildings. Wtf.Also this sentence appears over and over again: "This is the age of origin ability!" I'm still reading because I hate myself, but if you're looking for a story that actually makes sense, this isn't the one you want.

It's really bad.Like extremely so. Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text Filler text

I seriously find it boring,  At the start it was interesting but for some odd reason the author left evrything hanging. The Mc's attitude towards his new family seem idiotic to the point that it doesn't even make sense why the family was introduce in the story just to be left afterwards with a very very very few chaptet mentioned. The mc granda pa was interesting sadly he was just mentioned for the sake of mentioning I haf no idea what the author was thinking aftet reading 40+ chaptets i ask my self., what the hell did i just read. The cultivation somethig was also left hanging wih vague introduction I was surprised that the mc became OP after a few chapters. I can guess the Mc was just being prepared by the author but for god sake why was it so boring... Their was a fiancée mentionef after that none, their was a master mentioned aftet that none. For crying out loud the mc was so OP yet so weak in character it's totally chaotic and unbalance charactet. So far all i can remember is mc this mc that. When that evil god was introduce i expected some interesting development because how epic the foreshadowing was but it was also my first disappointment since the author might just got lazy and decide to end it all in the most idiotic way and the aftermath of that is also idiotic to the point that i feel like punching someone. Then when i thought that the story becomes stable author went kapoosh and jusy made mc decide to go into a journey. For god sake atleast end everything first before moving on to another!!! Mc relationship towards his family went kapoosh. Mc meet mysterious oldman and his daughter also went kapoosh!! Mc meet a strong antagonist also went kapoosh... The only impression i have on this novel is that it nevet finish any setting and if it ever did it is rush or just ended in an idiotic way. And the feeling that you are always left hanging it's more annoying than your good old cliff hangers.

Hey love the 8 chapters so far.I wanted you to start off with a 5 star review XD(ignore this ignore this ignore this ignore this ignore this ignore this ignore this) just getting them 140 characters

over all good work it have good grammar but still small paced not bad as they are starting chapters. It will be great if the world is explained in detail by chapters

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Really like the story. Still only around 20 chapters, but it's still so good. Like the mc and his strength development. So its a new and very interesting story on this site.

Pretty weak story with horrible characters.Mc gets random power ups and passes every impossible fight just by thinking of his sister and getting plot armor.Wierd disgusting ****** relationship between mc and his 10 years old.Constant flashbacks with no relevant info in the middle of a chapter for no reason.