Whispers of Metal: The Forge of the One Mage

"Hey, Reed stop that!" I commanded.

"Come on you bastards, hit me harder" yelled him even louder.

Little confusing for me

"I'll tell you this."

The first was money.

"Let us be off Amelia" said Brynhildr as the Valkyries formed up behind Brynhildr.

"Hah." Marilyn lets out a breath and drops her embarrassed look. "You're a very good observer, aren't you?"

Good start will continue reading in the future..

story development is one of the worst I have seen tbh they skipped 7 years of time and he somehow got a seed in him with a spirit and he is a SLAVEI REPEAT A SLAVVEEEE I hate when mcs are under someone so this book ain't for me

Good job for starting the new book~ (≧∇≦)b surely going to be interesting just like the others!  Congrats and have fun writing! The review: The story is quite interesting with the unique concept of reincarnation but not as an extra, villain,  or the protagonist—but a character that wasn't supposed to exist anymore. The MC is a science guy and yet he didn't have that crisis about "oh no but this is illogical!" The cur.ses will most likely remind you of JJK 🙂u200d↕️ the start is good,  although it had many information that if you skim, it's a little bit hard to register. I love it when the something like [The cursed energy is showing interest in you], I definitely will read more ♡＾▽＾♡