Whispers of Metal: The Forge of the One Mage

Very beautifully narrated! Thank you, I'm looking forward to more

If you have any questions regarding the story I would try and answer them in the replies of this review.Now to the review. It's hard to assess your, own work. I won't give myself all five starts for everything and think that I'm the best. I'm not confident in my writing skill, but I hope that it's on the average level. I won't be able to update the novel frequently and write more than three chapters a week because of my work. Right now this is a hobby. The story development, characters, worldbuilding, all may be unnecessarily slow-paced or written without appropriate attention.Yet I hope that someone would find this story attractive and enjoyable. I don't need powerstones, if you want, you can spend them on a more deserving novel. I don't need hollow five-star reviews that don't describe the novel, but I would appreciate any, review, even one-star. As long as it describes what and where I should change and improve, ups and downs of this story.

Sigh. It has a good start but too long and windy middle part. The characters are a but flat and yeah, even the choice of heroine is so bad. Sigh. Seems writer is fantastical about rich and glory and typical rich man life.

Hello, let me brief you a bit about this certain matter. I saw many people commented that because of the MC's kindness, he got betrayed. But that is only a very very small part of the reason. He got betrayed because of a very unexpected reason, but I will reveal it in the future. You may be disappointed with the first chapter, but that's because you haven't seen the future chapters yet. I don't plan to make this a typical story, so I hope you can continue to support me. Thank you!

Giving a low score for two reasons.1.I always go into these kinds of books hopeful but come out disappointed. Usually this is because the MC does a complete 180 in personality and winds up being someone that I despise.2. I'll remain leery of these ones until I see something that has become a  trope happen.

The story is just bad. Very op mc, playing a game, given unbelievable luck. If that's the only problem, then I wouldn't mind, but it's like the author never considered the ramifications of his choices for the mc. If you want a novel without serious thinking then you can read this. Each chapter is long and until now there not many exciting battle. At best, this story reads like a rough draft. A generic plot, and general direction of story laid out, but without anything else

I'm still waiting for additional chapters of this nice book, which has a fascinating and original plot. Keep up the excellent work! will advocate for readers

Writing Quality and Stability of Updates: 5/5 on both, Simply I couldn't ask for anything anything better as the author never fails to deliver us with one chapter every day. The author has a good command over English, certainly not a surprise considering he hails from a natively-english speaking countryStory Development: 5/5, I was a little skeptical at first due to the sypnosis, Kind of just came off as an another local waste rises up to be a phoenix with dragon queen. But glad to say that I was wrong, very wrong. The average aptitude of protagonist is barely ever mentioned in chapters and even if they are mentioned I don't remember any of them being in contempt which is quite a relief. The plot of this story is progressing at a gradual speed, not too fast not too slow, just how I and I imagine a lot of people would like it. Nothing cliche seems to come up yet which is good.Character design: This is I believe the greatest part about this novel, as every character, starting from the protagonist to the garbage picker has a certain depth of character and each of them seem to posses a rational mind( it pains me to think something so common such as this is rare to find in this CEO-novel filled website ). The protagonist has shown no signs of possessing a moral compass which to me is a plus point but I'd understand if that turns you off from this story. I'm pretty sure he'd only get colder and more sophisticated as he progresses. Would Background: I have nothing to say about this one as we only know about his sect till yet(not that I am complaining). But referring from how this novel never manages to disappoint me I am certain that the world background as it gets revealed won't be bad.