Water Containing The Moon

This novel has a very good premise, the MC works hard and has a system and I like that combination a lot however there are quite a few problems I had with the novel. Firstly, the MC works very hard and has OP skills ranked SS etc however he's not that impressive. Sure, he's better than the others but he's not astoundingly good and he improves quite slowly despite his 99 luck stat and system. That being said, he is very good. Secondly, the romance is utterly forced, the MC's personality is like 'I love my mom so much, I'll do whatever to make her happy and even have her live with me and my wife after I get married.' MC is also very boring in my opinion, his actions are really robotic and also the way he talks is (or how it's written). However, the biggest problem is the grammar for me. If an editor was hired it would retain a lot more people to read this I think. Paying SS for grammar of this quality sucks. This is not the author's native language, yes, but for the novel to be pay-walled it should have good grammar. A few more points; the upload speed is very good, the author doesn't take long hiatuses like other authors of original novels or even translations. If you're a fan of basketball and steady growth of a main character playing it I recommend this.

It’s pretty misleading putting the reincarnation and transmigration tag. He gets some memories from the future, and absolutely nothing changes within him. He is like, ‘cool,’ and moves on. I kept reading in hopes that it would be used in any way, but that did not happen. Moreover, a lot of situations and inside the story feel disposable, as though they contribute nothing to it. If you cut those chapters in half, it would stay the same. There has been no interesting or intriguing development that would entice me to read more. As a reader, I hoped for a more meaningful development.

Biakos other book Rise of the Undead Legion is a fantastic book and rated very high, but i truly enjoyed this book immensely more and find it to be even better than the former. Biako if youre reading this PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update a little more often if you can. This story is incredible and has so much potential to get even better! The character development and the challenges put in front of the MC and side characters are exciting and fun. The background in this book and the pantheons of differing religions give this book so many different directions to always keep you on your toes. I hope to see this book go through to the end!

Great Novel Highly Recommended.............................................................................................................

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Development is just too slow and things take too long to build up Mc doesn't give the feel as someone's ancestor.It gives you a disconnect since mc is much older than them.My expectation also took a nose dive when 3 girls were introduced. Grand daughters understandable but the thief girl is just boring.And why does the author make the Cecil family retards at least one of his grand daughters should be smart but they feel like retards.

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Really unique power system and anarchy world. It is very exciting to read what will happen next as it is always something new and unexpected, I recommend it!