War Over Creation

This was one of the worst 1rst Chapters I've read in about 60 novels or so. If only the chapter was just boring and the the MC borderline morronic like many other novels.... but no... the author had to go further.. "how could we possibly have something as incredible and mysterious as Math" Good fu.cking luck explaining grades, like having 6/20 or even selling shi.t. No commerce will happen, no numbers, no sharing something between people... Cause we have name for that, it's math, and its science. And we don't do science... *slow clap* "this literature you're talking about is Science, right? Science doesn't exist here" Well, little friend. Playing with words is kinda different than playing with numbers. And if the author wrote on his resume that he was a scientist cause he wrote a novel... that would be very sad. Good luck explaining how people wrote their school books, or even the novels every one knows... because Writing is science.. and we don't do science.. *slow clap* I was so fed up with this chapter early on... and was pushing "one more chapter, the end is soon

amazing story love the protagonist and its morals tho its a little bit hard to keep up whit the story love the evolution and wuould like to see what is next good work

Man I remember reading this way back I loved it. Until you started adding you yuri harem bs, but I am guessing you already know this from everyone telling you over and over again. Anyway here is a meme for you and the cucks fetish you fed for so long.

love it so far and cant complain. 5/5 for me nicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenicenice

just read any of the other comments on this novel the are probaly 99% accurate

I just wrote a big review and it did not save, so I'm going to cry real hard, excuse me.From the little that I have read, this novel is quite ordinary in its premise but quite promising nonetheless. World background: from the little I've seen, Author-san shows us their world and society with actions more than with long descriptions, so that's pretty nice. Can't say much about story development yet, but what I can say is that my attention was properly hooked up and I can't wait to see more from it.Character Design: I think it's a bit early to review this topic since the characters were not truly flashed out yet. However, they do feel unique and discernable from one another and not a bunch of mindless puppets.Writing Quality: It always feels a bit hypocritical reviewing this topic on stories from non-native speakers, because I'm too learning the language. There're some small typos and weird sentences but they did not compromise my reading experience. What did stand out for me were some complex( in a good way) sentences that were well made contrasting with the weird ones, but that's natural, just a bit peculiar.THE BIGGEST TOPIC: I don't know how or why, but what I can see in this novel is a lot of care and love from Author-san on writing this. They wish to share the same happy feelings they feel when doing all this and I think that's quite a good mentality. Always answering questions and engaging with readers. Suggestions: It's easy to say ' get an editor' but's not easy to do it. So here is my small type that I hope can help you. When you write on the author's note the explanation of something you felt confusing, that's a sign to go back and try redoing it. Sometimes we write something so obvious on our heads that we do not make it explicit in the text. It's a hard process to imagine what others will think when reading your text but I think it does help.Keep the good work!

Good novel. Characters can be a little gimmicky at times, but overall very entertaining. While the MC is tricking everyone outwardly, his personality as written in the story is very honest. He isn't trying to fool himself or the readers into thinking he is a good person, which I appreciate. His reactions to situations are consistent, and my one compliant is how dumb the author made one of the female characters. I know she is an npc, but could it hurt to make her a little bit smarter?

This is good. Your hate makes you stronger!