Valkyrie

Too many cliffhangers. The author included many mysterious enemies in the story, but the author wouldn't reveal who the enemy is. The author would show how powerful the enemies are by writing it in the enemies' perspective, but the MC would have no idea about the enemies, and when you're reading this, you will only feel how stupid the MC is because of that. The enemies come very suddenly as well, like the MC would provoke a powerful guy without knowing just because he bought something from the guy in an auction. The whole story just feels forced and stupid with a million cliffhangers. It just makes the whole story confusing but not mysterious at all. Btw the MC is a lolicon, which makes the story even worse. Overall a boring story that's full of forced "mysteries". Imagine a story with many "mysteries" that you don't know, yet the author kept adding more "mysteries

This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.And with the worst case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.

Great work Author love this book even though I haven't finished reading all the chapters keep writing and never stop .......💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯lo e the characters too and the plot .

The pointless conversation continued on as John practiced acting like a captain.

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<p>"It's... not that! I just..." Suyin faltered, her voice trailing off as she struggled to articulate the whirlwind of emotions that churned within her.</p>

Zhao Lifei groaned to herself when she groggily woke up the next morning, her body sore again.

We need more pls tell us while you were gone you were stockpiling or something