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very good!!! I'm loving the story, the protagonist is also very captivating, I expected him to be darker in relation to the monsters, more until it's cool.Keep up the great work!!!

breath of fresh air, such a unique and amazing novel

I don't think it is a copy of the old one. This reads like a reviewed and changed version. Like the next step in refining a book before release.MC is just as stupid as before. If the system can plan elaborately and even plan years ahead to heal MCs finance, then the system can plan more than 24 hours ahead to ensure MC accomplishes his goals with as little obstruction as possible.Trouble is MC just doesn't ask the right questions and every problem is solved deux ex machina by the system. This means that every problem and trouble the MC encounters is because he doesn't ask the right questions.It is almost impossible to write a good story if at every turn the readers feal cheated because the only reason suspense happens in the book is the hand of the author.Even the most stupid person would have asked "How can I live happily with my wife while ensuring everyone who wronged us gets what they deserve? " after a few years. And the MC had enough time to ask every question imaginable in prison.Also, why didn't he just ask to be released earlier? Don't tell me the system can't get him a cellphone into prison. A single call was all he needed to get a pardon. This is how the American prison system works.He could have build an empire from prison, with scores of researchers trying to find a cure for his fiance.This story only works because the author keeps the MC stupid to the extreme.

Absolutely gripping.I was completely enthralled and yearned for more.I can't wait to see what else the author has in store,truly a fascinating and entertaining read.

I was hooked with the character, especially in the club formation scene, when she tells him about the truth, he was quite smart to try to find a way out with the club member condition haha anyway  I'm excited how it turns out, reading further.

Good one having a interesting boy story with a different story which found me really interested. This boy having good bussiness mind setup and a good characteristics towards others

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interestingthe way to defeat monster in dungeon interesting. not just hit and killthe dungeon more like puzzle tipe dungeon ?its probably temporary. hopefully the novel not go to full kill type novel in more chapter