Undying Shinobi

It is good, the Mc has a goal and motivation, a cheat and a decisive personality. Unlike some game novels who have weak MC claiming to be pro, have rich experience and whatnot, only to suffer setbacks in the first few chapters, this one's MC lives up to expectation.  As for the Mech part, we don't get to see that part yet. But yes, he can build a mech on his own with his cheat item. I just hope he would not need to go to the ends of the earth to farm precious and ultra rare materials just to build a single mech. Hopefully, it would focus more on design.

I am rating you five stars.Your story plot is very nice!Apart from a few grammatical errors, Everything is fineNice plot tooAnd one thing I like about it is that you always update on time

This was quite the enjoyable first chapter. I always enjoy a bit of a slow burn when introducing the main story/character. I look forward to seeing where this goes!

This is a good story, but the author needs to take note of improper tense usage and an awkward word choice. However, the author is able to paint such a vivid picture with his/her/their words that I felt very drawn into the story. Keep it up, author!

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'This is senpai's last year! Please, please! Let her win!' Charlotte wished with all she could.

"Urahara sure is a sneaky man isn't he," Renji said as he ran his hand through his hair.

"W-waeyo?" tanyanya yang menyadari perubahan mimik wajahku.