Great cover! it instantly hooked me for the story. And so far writing quality is very good!as for what should be improved. the synopsis... its a mess. I'm my opinion you should properly arrange it. Also after reading some chapters I noticed some of your sentences were too long. don't be afraid to go on to the next line. Also am very doubtful about your chapter names(perhaps make them a bit shorter?)
Well the mc doesn't have a cheat from the start,the story is well developed.The mc suffered losses sometimes but learns from them.The main character when he didn't have a cheat focused on what he was good in rather than cultivation which he had a weak talent in the beginning and reached a high level in the subjects that he focused on.
Finally, no more where the MC try to regain his human form because his a monster. The MC is cunning and smart, he know how to adapt to the situation his in.
The novel is going great so far, I love how the God of War didn't fully take over Li Chen's life. the conflict between the two is what I am here for. can't to see what happens as the story unfold.
I've read over a hundred chapters of this novel now. This is the type of monster MC you would either adore or hate. Why do I say this? This protagonist never truly becomes a dragon, at heart or soul, he will always be human. You could see this from each and every one of his interactions with sentient species; every time he inflicts harm upon them he would wallow in self-pity, guilt and philosophical debates (on the universe, life and death) for chapters on end. There's no growth to him as a dragon, whilst his power grows, his personality stays just as it was in chapter 1. Him living for years as a dragon doesn't change him a bit...which I find extremely disappointing.
"Why are you here champion of Athena? Last I knew you faithfully served the king of Heliantis, now he is dead and a mere handful of months later you arrive on my doorstep promising servitude." The scarred man, Alex, looked up at the portly king in front of him and said,
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