The shackles of destiny (Permanent hiatus)

My friend, I am  here to tell You a story the story of "The Eros God System – Saving the World and Defeating the Demonesses by Busting My Nut, One At a Time.".Once upon a time a good book with intresting caractere,good writing and  a good story sadly it didn't last. the hordes of advertisement and fake chapter started, after that the legendary shorter chapter and story degradation began on the 34 chapters 22 had story the rest was advertisement and we as the readers had to withstand that, our tears of sorrow became blood and this blood filld our sallow grave. This was the story of a good book, killed by The Crow of Guilt.But My Friend it's not the end of the story because The Crow of Guilt returnd and upon realising his failure he decided to erase his book sadly now nobody can read The Original, Full of Fake chapters and Fake updates."So what did the Crow do this time?" You say. Hahaha he made a new book, ho.... i mean a "new old" book, Maybe you did not see it because it's no longer available only people who were there at the time of the old war know about it.You see the "new old" is exactly the same book every letter is the same and The Crow only realised 9 chapters(and an extra with only that in it "阿斯顿啊u") and again our hearts were full of sorrow, but in the deepest part there was something else a powerful feeling that tear one's heart apart this feeling was hatred. we the people who supported The Crow and loved him started to feel loathing and hatred toward The bird who bring sorrow. And so this "new old" book only received one review by Gabriella and it was full of anger.now let's talk about what we have before our eyes the "new" book you who has not been part of the war maybe indifferent but you shall not be fool by The Crow of Guilt, He the one how bring sorrow will break your heart and mind i've warned you be careful. the "new" book is the same story but the MC Alex has a new name and he did not "slip down of an escalator" the rest of the story 95% is the same.A year we had a year of peace and the Crow dug out the war axe we who fought in the war are tired we no longer can fight we...we. we are weak.And here we are look a "new" chapter who look a lot like the "old" almost like the crow just change some word here and there to hide the truth.and after only 21 chapters you need to pay to read that mean the chapter 22" 34 Threesome (1)" is an "old" chapter so now you need to pay to read a chapter you've already read a year ago. I...i no longer have the force................... i think it is the end of the story.....excuse me i would like to be alone till my last moment.my friends i'm sorry if i am late,now is time i join youGoodbye World.

So I know the author is extremely sensitive in hearing negative reviews, but I have to be honest. As much as the premise does to serve the fans with things they (including myself) would like (such as VRMMO concepts, Romance, Strong powers etc.) It has a very important issue of execution. From the first chapter, I can quote what others have been saying which boils down to it "being all over the place". It tells us what is going on rather than showing, but in a very loose method. It does not keep a focus and ultimately, becomes uncomfortable to read. Each chapter should have a purpose. The *flow* and *transitioning* of each sentence and paragraph should be strong and easy to follow through. What I would advise is for the author to look at *how* other authors write their books. Yes, I say "how" becasue I feel that the writing style needs to change. It can get exhausting, especially if a lot of chapters have been completed. Let's say you learned a lot from other books and finally came up with a better style – it'd take a long time to fix all of it. I understand. However, if that's the case I would get an editor to help you out. There's plenty of authors who would do that in the discord for Webnovel/RoyalRoad. For other works, I'd analyze how Sword Art Online, Rising of the Shield Hero or Library of Heaven's Path wrote their chapters and their style of conveying their messages to their audience. Plot wise, make sure when writing a scene to imagine how the readers will feel about that scene when comparing it to the *previous chapters*. For example, if the main cast fought and won against a guild of people but then suffers against several weaker hunters later on, there should be a reason *why* they are struggling in the very least, or else it will leave them confused. Overall, great job with nearly 3 million views and good luck with the rest! 👍🏻

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...Shameless Promotion:Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

This is pretty interesting, plot is good, though not my favorite genre.Keep writing I'm sure it will be great!(BTW what's YULETIDE? Don't understand the name)

🤦🤬, go dirty some other place, stay away from here, we do not need to know about this culture neither we wish to be a part of it, this place is already destroyed by Yuri in the harem, I will not let you destroy this place anymore, Abra ka dabra gili gili chuuuuu, go away

As always this author delivers 10/10/10/20/100 xD So many good pieces I could explode! Now exploring the villain world! Noah is an interesting character best one yet!

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