The Wolf Brother, Wolf Sister System

I feel like Elyon with give us a story with all the characters in his story is so far together on an epic journey of magical battles. I can’t wait. I hope I’m right. I’m so saving towards this one. Please let it be so oh my God to have Mr. Lux William and 13 on one team oh my God, their enemy must be real strong, fighting gods for all of them to come together. This is going to be epic.

I really like this novel. The only problem is that the update has pretty much stopped. The MC Chu Li is fairly OP and the novel is mostly fast paced in the beginning...and then it basically goes on hiatus for hundreds of chapters. So far, only about 1200 chapters are translated, Chu Li goes from Foundation > Innate Master > Grandmaster in a bit more than 200 chapters...and now at around 1200...he is still a Grandmaster. He has basically treaded around Grandmaster and searching for the path to being Enlightened for over 1000 chapters. According to Novel Update, this WRC has 3453 chapters and per wiki there are 6 more realms after Enlightened Master...so...a third or more of the novel is spent at 1 realm...talk about drawing out the story.

i dont really get where this is going. the mc is already the richest guy in the world, he has a wife, and he seems setteled in life. where is this going? I dont know, but based on what i do know of the chapters so far(20) and the genre, i really cant imagine it going anywhere exiting. also, i find the whole plot way to far fetched, its just to improbable to follow. it seems boring and lame.

plagiarized  of someone work that crazy  they should be more strict

it's so interesting...it's sometime got a new gate vibe, but it's one hella awesome story we have here... thanks for the wonderful work, author..😍💐💐💐

i have read up to the latest translated chapter in here..the novel is good so far. but i hope the translator picks it up again..i tried reading the MTL and its a mess.

I'm going to shamelessly give myself 5 stars. I hope you stick through the first 5 chapters at least before deciding if you like my book or not. I strive to improve my writing every chapter and I would love honest feedback.

I’ll start my review of this novel by saying outright that Pancakes is my favorite author on webnovel, and I throughly enjoy their novels, so there may be some inherent bias in my review. And everything written below is personal opinion. I have currently read up to chapter 132, and really enjoy this novel as it differs from Pancakes other works like Epic of Caterpillar, DQR, and World Traveling. I really enjoy the balance of slice of life elements that are vital to the understanding of the MC Elayne and the other supporting characters like her daughter Elena, friend Rika and others. Mixed in with the action elements that occur through the VRMMO that is the key element of this story. The main reason that our MC started to play is quite admirable as she wishes to get closer to her daughter after passing of her husband 5 years ago. None of the characters so far feel one dimensional or flat and each adds a unique aspect to the world building and overall story. While some readers may question certain relations between characters I found overall that the characters are very well thought out. The world building in this novel has been developing at a steady pace throughout, both in elements of the “real world” and BNLO VRMMO world. Pancakes has an extremely firm grasp on mythological and fantasy elements as seen throughout their writing and other novels. The hinted possible fusion of the “game” and “reality” hints to more elements to be revealed about the world and universe at large that Pancakes has constructed in their other novels. While having read the other novels provides more insight into these foreshadowing elements it is not require at all in order to understand and enjoy this novel. The pacing of this story may seem slow to those that enjoy quick paced and action packed stories. The slower pace of this novel really fits the characters and the world in my opinion. As I mentioned earlier the slice of life elements and action come together to form in my opinion a cohesive plot line. Pancakes has great update stability, and in my time as a reader of theirs I cannot remember a time that they missed an update ever. In terms of writing quality grammatical errors are few and quite rare, however my own grammatical knowledge isn’t the greatest. Give the novel a try!