The Substitute (BL)

After a few minutes of silent walking, we arrived in an isolated apartment. It's a few blocks from my company building where I was trying to jump.

Shirou retaliated, Kanshou and Bakuya forming in his hands where they clashed against Bellona's spear.

She asked with a tilt of her head.

Only shooting stars

"....." Mr. Rioy was silent with his serious expression.

the writing and description overall is good  though I feel the story a little empty honestly. it would have been better if there was an introduction about how the mc died in the first chapter, here we're directly thrown in action without context(the synopsis isn't enough  it has to be in the story ) another point is that it's a system story, I expect more action, how will the mc evolve further? it feels too slow. I hope to see an improvement in these aspects , you have won a daily reader after all :D

Love it, so far.When there will be more?

I really liked your story, please keep it going!awesome 💯

the detailed description of  world background is so detailed that it makes one understand what exactly was there. it make you feel like your seeing what the author was imagining while writing . l like the ways you detailed description . and most importantly the story development is so intriguing and character design if soooo wonderful . it's really a nice book to read