"Come on no fun, Max. Oh hey, who is the new kid? Also, why is Alex's cloak on her?" Ash asked him as he zeroed in on the late teens female who was standing behind Max.
We made it to a strange black skyscraper, on the sides were the words "HERO" spelled in blue. "So, who are you?" "Oh, the name's Diane I work for Endeour." said Diane. We entered the building, from left to right were Hi-tech looking computers, there were rows of people on the computers. I managed to peek at one of the screens, "Project Winter Moon." I didn't know what that meant but decided to shrug it off. The first floor was pretty much all computers. At one of the walls was an elevator. She pressed the call button to signal the elevator to come down, it only took a few seconds for thr elevator to arrive. We got in, I was in awe. An entire wall was filled with buttons. There were 500 floors in total, Diane pressed the 500th one. "Where's Lissy?" I asked. "Oh her wounds were harder to heal so we put her on the rehabilitation floor, she should be fine in a few days though we have to be careful." "Why do you have to be car-." I was cut off by the sound of the elevator door opening, right in front of me was a man who looked like he was in his twenties, he had spiky blonde hair, blue eyes, and a large white cape draped around his back. "Ah, you must be Ace, I've been hearing a lot about you, especially from Mondred." Endeour gave out a chuckle at his last line.
This novel has so much potential to be good and there are points where it’s fun to read. My complaints are:- The ranking/cultivation system is not mentioned leaving you to question what rank comes before or after.- the mc use of resources just seems so ridiculous and unnecessary- the author tends to drag the chapter out with useless information that is repeated over and over again just worded differently.- the world building and character description is barely satisfactory (I don’t even know how certain characters look only their names)This novel leaves so much to be desired and it sucks because it really has potential to be a great novel.
It's quite early to tell whether it will be a good webnovel the story can go in various routes ( the chapter I have read up to) . But still the early chapter were good, I do have great expectations for the novel and I hope the author keeps it. Overall it's worth to give it a try. It's far better than the other novels on this platform 🗑️.
Could have ‘sworn I left a review, o well my bad. I will write one now. I give this work 5 stars, I believe it deserves it. Hard to find good reads now-a-days but this was definitely a good read thanks for the chapters
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