The Sin Within (18+)

"Jungkook asked me to help you." I looked at him, he wouldn't go here even if Jungkook asked him to. "He blackmailed me." He simply said.

     "Are you really okay with this. Aren't y-you gonna be like undressed or something like that?"

"Exactly! Since you have given him a chance then let him prove himself and meanwhile you should conduct yourself properly." Shen Ya suggested.

Mayo: (walking out of the room) of course, I have just opened the window for you to vaunt, haven't I?

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

I sighed. "So Writerz, have you done the homework?"

overall this is a decent book with a decent start. I may revisit it later on when more chapters are out.the reaction from those around him as he goes from Tyrant to beloved ruler is dynamic. Although where there is lower loyalty it would be nice to see more logical and cunningness instead of the stereotype of 'impossible' the dump villain cant't believe what's happening. On the opposite the loyal are blind followers with there characters done nicely... but could have more depth to them and individuality instead of just following the lord around like a bunch of lackies

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I am thoroughly enjoying this, the writing is good 😊

Even though the flow of the story is a bit dragging and the character development of the ML is starting to make no sense (CHAPTER 1-31), it still makes you read for more, especially when the FL's character development is starting to break from its shell. I like the POVs of each character, making you torn between the ML and the 2nd ML (like author please, keep the 2nd ML to the FL, but is there a great moment for the ML and the FL?).I'll be waiting for new updates...