Its absolute cringe trash after the first 9 chapters........................................................................................................
i dont know why this is so highly rated .. maybe author deleting other reviews .. mostly focused on the romance/harem part .. feeling develop too quickly, story not yet developed enough to comment, .. awkward dialogue except that writing and everything was above the mark .. no proper grasp on the power levels , cause seems like he is both weak and strong / skip levels all at the same time .. 3.7
Having read one if the author’s other works, the readers can only expect the best of unique and compelling things. Which this novel conjures in spades. From intriguing backgrounds well described to characters most compelling. Most especially the lead; Ace. A well spun tale, an alluring title.
Frankly, it's hard to say ntr, but there's definitely cheating. Ntr usually has sexual intercourse and stealing. Here, Kyle and Helia have been in a relationship for a while. There was no sexual intercourse between them. But there was flirting, kissing and hugging. This is cheating no matter which country's culture and law you look at. The author wrote it well, not as disturbing as ntr novels but still not for me. Cheating is one of my most hated mistakes. In cheating, reasons are just excuses. She was alone, weak, in a difficult situation. These are just excuses to console yourself. Helia admits that she loved Kyle too, when she was about to die. Of course, we can have feelings for more than one person in life. However, this is not an excuse to cheat. If there was a reverse harem or open relationship, it would be more acceptable to me. But cheating is taboo for me. Of course, we should not blame only Helia. Arial himself cheated on Helia. That's why this relationship felt so weak. I don't like drama too much. The novel itself is good. The writing style of the author is very good. However, this novel is not for me. For me, the most important elements in the novel are; plots and relationships. That's why I wasn't too attached to this novel. However, the author did a good job. I would recommend reading it to anyone who is not bothered by it.
Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.
Overall your story is great; it’s written well, and the story is interesting. The only suggestion I have would be to have a chapter where all the sci-fi names/machinery are listed and explained (much like how FCS was explained in chapter 14 iirc). Or make guide us into familiarity by allowing us to grasp each new abbreviation before introducing another term.I love sci-fi, but even this was a little hard for me too follow in the later chapters.The scene with the old man and police officer was rather funny; I would’ve commented, but it kept loading!Anyway, will be following this!
i am giving an honest review , i know you have got inspiration from other novels but in other novels it was not blunt as your novel 1st chapter , atleast there should be emotions and all , in the novel mc got pain and he said 'argh just like that half an hour pass .....after 2nd flaw - when you write you suddenly changed the perspective like 1st to 3rd pov it so sudden that it becomes annoying ......like from 'I' to 'He' and after he suddenly become a serene and calm as he was not got to surreal pain at least there should be some emotions man , it's like blunt - yeah i got transmigration yeah ... is it real ..oh yeah ... and also this he also know he is an 'extra' what does extra means in this .....i got it means side character but what does it sudden i am extra then i will steal the hero things or artifacts etc.etc.....i got this it it's too blunt at least edit your 1st chapter to get proper reading atleast ..if you don't like my opinion you can delete it but yeah you should read first your 1st chapter in reader perspective or read other novel where you got inspired ...
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