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Its a nice story, with potential. The Mc is an intersting character and is ruthless.The only problem I had was that the start was a bit too cliched and the circumstances of the original owner of the body seemed a bit too exaggerated.It would have been fun if the original actually became a vengeful ghost and accompanied the transmigrator.Either by haunting him and trying to repossess hi own body or by becoming a companion or a frenemy mixture of both.That aside Awesome story

I love this novel. A resemblance to overlord. Big fan. a very detailed story. i like the mc. Good continuaton Good continuaton.  #FrenchFan

This is in the middle of the pack when it comes to wizard cultivation novels. Unlike its predecessors it has realistic individuals with enough kind people to balance out the arrogant ones. The MC isn't evil and cares a bit about friendship. However, there are a lot of things I dislike. First is the slow progression. It has taken 170 chapters just for the MC to unlock his magic. This amount of time is ridiculous and should've never happened. Second is the amount of time the MC is an apprentice and taking unnecessary risks. He should have been smarter based off his previous teacher Jon, but instead he has been selling alchemy weapons, participating in death matches for fun and allowing his enemies who want to kill him to power up at a faster rate than him (Which is BS as the MC should be over 10 times faster with his technique.) Thirdly is the way how the author tries to create mystery in this novel about the 'truth'. What truth are you even talking about?? You never really gave it a real explanation and used it as a plot stopper by making his own teacher refusing to teach the MC anything at all because this rank 2 wizard wants a 15yr old boy to find the 'truth' of the universe by himself in 1 year. And the last problem I have is how the MC hasn't shown any urgency to save Jon. Instead the author has held it off and only brought it up when ever its relevant in the arcs. Overall I dropped this fic around chapter 265 due to the pacing being horrendously slow. (Weird since I usually love slow pace stories.)

The author did well with the prologue, although at first glance it may seem like he didn't put enough in the synopsis of the novel you quickly lose that notion once you start reading. The prologue is short yet enticing giving the readers enough to get a general idea of what the novel is about but also leaving them with an after taste in their brain which demands that you read more. As the chapters continue you begin to be drawn in by the characters and the way the author tells his story. Putting aside the interesting concept behind the story for a new author the writing is pretty top notch and as more chapters are published I'm sure their skill will increase exponentially. Give this book a read you won't regret it.

They understood that only one of them would get the flower and they didn't doubt that their sisters would be able to gain recognition.

"No, I don't care, I just find it annoying that your always act so proud, let yourself go a little," He sighed, "You would feel much better if you could relax more."