The Great Voyage: the Prop Master on the Straw Hat Ship MTL

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A great novel,starting is goodThe grammar is also good. it draws you In from the beginning.The world building, and settting is also goodCan’t wait for more chapters

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Easily one of my favorite novel. The cultivation system in this is loose, everchanging, and just like it should be, heaven defying. also, the main character is an actual mediocre talent. He works hard to get to the top, and even then he may not be the best.

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I wanna like this story but there is next to no story development and frankly there is not a single character that I genuinely like, just ones I dont hate... or well, really hate. I definitely wanna mention that it's fine to have a main character start out weak, but it's extremely frustrating to read a story in which the character is set up to fail and be made a mockery of around every corner no matter what he does. This was especially unfortunate at one point where th mc used his brain to set up a trap just to fail at the last second for a totally avoidable reason that came out of nowhere. In 80 chapters we got one sneak peak into what's special about him and will presumably help him become strong at some point, but even then the focus was much more on how that ability is limited instead of how the mc will build up on that ability. Which I feel is just not enough to balance out the frustration that builds up while reading.Now at the end I wanna say that I do feel like the author is improving and the story might very well get more engaging at a later point but you might wanna start reading from chapter 50 like suggested because before that point it is genuinely jarring to read, not because of grammar or anything but because of the above mentioned reasons.

Hey! The book is amazing, I just noticed a small grammar error in chapter one (I stopped when I noticed it because I need to help a fellow author out) when Dio and Rex are entering the bunker and Rex is talking about how it would be a whole new ecosystem if the cave went down farther, his name isn’t capitalized in the sentence after that! Before posting chapters I recommend reading it before you publish it and carefully looking for errors. Anyways I hope you can help me in the future as I helped today! Keep writing you have an awesome talent.

Percy uncapped riptide while Aphrodite summoned pink hunting knives which Artemis nodded in approval at. They both lunged at Gaia and started to fight her at the same time. It was like they knew each other for a long time and trained together. Their movement was synchronised, much like Annabeth and Percy.