This is one of the best Storys i have ever read on this app. The characters feel so genuine and refreshing its honestly amazing. The balance between the 2 protagonists characters and there romance is written to absolute perfection My only point of criticism would be this story would really profit from a bit of proove reading. Dont get me wrong it is by no means badly written, its just that sometimes there is a word too much or a Word missing etc. doesnt really effect the reading in any dramatic way tho.
This novel is much better than the last few mmo novel. Story is interesting but idk if it will be selected. Last few novels chosen from trial read has been trash. I donβt know how those trash with horrible ratings got selected. Qidian should actually read our reviews, but they donβt.
a huge waste of potential, I love the power the MC has, but like I said you wasted it on a psychopath, you could literally do anything with it but you just go with sadistic jerk who only live to find entertainment like an addict trying to find his next fix....Well good luck in you story with your psychopath of a MC.
I enjoyed the story up until he got the dragons. I quit reading because they were both girls. Of course his pets are girls, all storyβs that have pets end up with having a girl pet who turns into a human form and then falls in love with the mc. Which turns the story into a harem. And unfortunately I donβt like harems.
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