The story is mehh so far, but i hope the MC will be cold and OP. If so, I'll stick with you through thick and thin Nanachi. oh and if you like this, check out DD
Too much fighting/training for me. Honestly, it would be a much better read if the MC had more interactions with the main cast or the original MC of the novel instead of just the teachers.Even with them, his interactions are too focused on training. It feels like you're trying to make him a killing machine whose only goal is to kill the final boss and save the world 🌍. While that goal is fine, it's not enough on its own. His life shouldn't revolve around fighting and improving himself to kill someone who appears at the very end of the novel.{he needs proper character development in this aspect.}Also, the fact that the MC can learn anything at a glance makes him a bit boring for me.Lastly, I think the story would improve if the MC formed deeper bonds with other characters while reducing the number of training chapters.I hope you find my review helpful.
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