I’ll get straight to the point: Don’t waste your time. There are so many problems with this book.First, the quality control is terrible. There are repeated chapters and the chapters aren’t even the same. It seems like the author had multiple drafts of some of the chapters and posted all of them. There are also basic issues with grammar and spelling, though it’s not the worst I’ve seen on the app.Second, the system is ridiculous. The MC gets points for doing even the most basic things and the levels weren’t well thought out. He basically reaches advanced or master level after leveling once. And as I said before, he gets points for doing the most basic things, like mastering all his school subjects by flipping through books or just interacting with an A student.He also masters cooking just by chopping some vegetables, which is another ridiculous thing. After that happens, the rest of the chapters so far becomes about his cooking skills and the fruit juice he made based on one of the many recipes he got from the system after leveling up once.The author obviously doesn’t know anything about cooking or wine, yet more than half the chapters are about the MC’s cooking or the juice he made, which tastes like red wine.Also, if you have suffered or are suffering from an eating disorder, then definitely skip this, because the author introduces an anorexic character who’s “cured” thanks to the MC’s drink, and it’s very obvious that the author knows nothing about anorexia or eating disorders.
A repetitive, one-dimensional story centered around an MC who simps for a forced love interest. At every turn, everyone disdains the MC until he face slaps them with his ability. He then is ‘magnanimous’ by giving those he slapped benefits.I’m more than 200 chapters in and disappointment is all I can really say. It took a drastic turn ever since he started simping for the girl.Verdict: Trash
Time for the author's shameless self-plugging! 😅Hi, I'm G.D. Cruz, human scribe of the Fayne (Foolhardies), and now, keeper of stories for the Abyss too. Although my synopsis says it all, I do want to add one tiny little detail... this isn't your typical Lit-RPG story. In fact, I believe you'll agree with me afte you finish reading chapter one. Damn, that Morgana is brutal. My lead, Leo, is every boy's dream... a successful game designer who builds the best games one could play... but then you get a glim**e of his sad tale at the beginning and you may not want to follow in his footste**. All in all, GmofS was a very fun work to write and I barely felt the time pass as I finished a chapter. So I hope to continue it for a long time to come. Cheers! And enjoy! 😁
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This is beyond trash!!!I can't believe anyone who reads would actually see this piece of shoddily collected words as a suitable read!!!It is not only a waste of time and space it is disappointingly poor in every sense.No coordination in the writing.World building is non-existent.The characters have no builds.The descriptive prowess of the writer is nothing to write home about.This is a waste of time.Do not read this.
Although it's my first time reading a book in this genre, I must say you portrayed all descriptions accurately. The world background, the game description and inside the game everything seems real. Nice work author. Keep up the good work.
Is this novel going to be continued with its translations? I hope that webnovel will make an announcement regarding this kind of discontinued translation of novels. I've noticed a few of them already. I hope they will not neglect the fact that there are readers who continue to support novels even though the translations have been non-existent for a while now. At least let us know what your plans are or put us out of our misery and just tell us not to hope anymore.
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