The Damned

One of the good books I have read so far. The ending was nice

Hello everyone, thank you for reading my second published book! Depending on the reads and feedback, this book will be updated either regularly or irregularly, thank you so much for devoting time for this novel of mine, cheers and hapoy reading! Any and all feedback, wheter negative or positive, is appreciated.

Raw Name: 开局被三千特工秘密保护Chapters: 150+status: Ongoing? (hasn't been updated for over 3 weaks)It may seem slightly different because qidan changed names and other minor things during the translation for obvious reasons but its the same novel.

Oye que pasa con está muerda de MC tonto es que tú también eres un tonto e inútil?????? simple mente estás arruinando está novela!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!¡¡!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!¡

looks interesting........................more chaps maybe?.......................................................mmmm...........................

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(C91) the mc seems almost too childish despite the harsh conditions he was in and even the goal seems so weak? something he can achieve once he evolves. Also the story it self the development is so how would you say it? boring? slow? like its so incredibly slow that it takes like 2-3 chapters to just explain how tasty a soul is and the fights oml i believe the fights his has arent worth the 3 or so or even more chapters on em since they arent that significant imo to have that much focus on to the point that i can just skip the fight and get told what happened in the chapter after the fight and i miss out on nothing. Also his bloodline power you might as well say he has a better version of the mcs power in solo levelling. As well his use of the dark element is boring and not at all 'smart' since darkness imo is either like how most stories show it as either a necromancy type of element or an assassin type of element with silent and quick qualities, in this its just show to be a binding and kinda just useless element. ------But despite all that its a good premise that mixes the plot of becoming a demon and there being different levels of realms that lower you go more stronger overall the demons are and the quality of nether and having the way of conquering planets is very interesting and probably the thing that intrigues me the most since it would be funny to see such a childish mc conquer a world.--

I said I'd do it when the cover change, so here it is...